The story itself is pretty good. There are some obvious situations very similar to other novels but it has quite a lot of potential in my opinion.
There would be 2 things which would need improvement though for me. The first is grammar since you have gone premium you really need to get a proofreader for your chapters especially the earlier free ones since they will get you readers.
The 2nd is more of a writing improvement, because you have it sometimes that the execution of the reaction to a scene seems to be more of a narrating instead of showing. This makes it seem quite bland in comparison to your build up which is very good. I like how you build up the *******, if you make the conclusion more of a showing the expressions or changing to the viewpoint of fans or other people it would make it more immersive.
I know that the author is quite new to writing and i see some improvements till now which makes me believe that it will become better and better.
Therefore i would definitely recommend this novel to everyone esoecially to us which liked top management or i really am a superstar but were disappointed with the big flaws in IRAS and the discontinue of TM.
⛔⚠️Attention⚠️⛔
Author never finish his novel. He always drops them midway. Author is a scam.
Authors Recipe:
1. Find good & popular korean novel
2. Copy korean novel plots & ideas but add a little bit of your own original ideas
3. Continue getting plots & ideas from other novels
4. When running out of ideas to copy drop the novel midway
The writing quality is mostly good, very little mistakes and the reading flows well.
Characters development so far is good, I appreciate the details some of the minor characters have. Though I don't really see too much original thought in the characters they are plenty good enough. I enjoy reading about all of them.
World building so far is adequate as it is just the first 20 chapters.
Great story with an original concept though I can forsee issues in the future with creating movies for the MC to act in I think it will be interesting to follow. Love it so far.
Updates are somewhat stable, hope for more as always.
"Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Sensation" is an enthralling read that captivates my imagination. The protagonist's relentless pursuit of fame resonates with readers, as we delve into the highs and lows of their meteoric rise. The author's vivid storytelling makes each chapter a rollercoaster of emotions, leaving me invested in every twist and turn. The character development is commendable, showcasing the vulnerability beneath the glitz, making it more than just a celeb gossip tale. A compelling journey for anyone who dreams big and believes in the power of resilience.
"Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star" is a captivating novel that delves into the realm of ambition, resilience, and the pursuit of dreams. It follows the protagonist's meteoric rise from humble beginnings to global fame, painting a vivid picture of the highs and lows of stardom. The story is not just about the glitz and glamour but also the sacrifices, hard work, and personal growth that come with it.
Through its characters, the novel explores themes of identity, relationships, and the price of success. It highlights the importance of staying grounded amidst the chaos, and the struggle to maintain authenticity in a world obsessed with image. The author masterfully weaves together the thrilling journey of self-discovery with the harsh realities of the entertainment industry, offering readers an intimate look at the human side of fame.
"Top Star" is a thought-provoking read that resonates with anyone who has ever dared to dream big. It serves as a reminder that beneath the surface of glamour, there are universal struggles and the power of the human spirit to overcome adversity. This engaging tale leaves readers inspired, reflecting on their own aspirations and the choices they make along their life's path.
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There would be 2 things which would need improvement though for me. The first is grammar since you have gone premium you really need to get a proofreader for your chapters especially the earlier free ones since they will get you readers.
The 2nd is more of a writing improvement, because you have it sometimes that the execution of the reaction to a scene seems to be more of a narrating instead of showing. This makes it seem quite bland in comparison to your build up which is very good. I like how you build up the *******, if you make the conclusion more of a showing the expressions or changing to the viewpoint of fans or other people it would make it more immersive.
I know that the author is quite new to writing and i see some improvements till now which makes me believe that it will become better and better.
Therefore i would definitely recommend this novel to everyone esoecially to us which liked top management or i really am a superstar but were disappointed with the big flaws in IRAS and the discontinue of TM.
Author never finish his novel. He always drops them midway. Author is a scam.
Authors Recipe:
1. Find good & popular korean novel
2. Copy korean novel plots & ideas but add a little bit of your own original ideas
3. Continue getting plots & ideas from other novels
4. When running out of ideas to copy drop the novel midway
Characters development so far is good, I appreciate the details some of the minor characters have. Though I don't really see too much original thought in the characters they are plenty good enough. I enjoy reading about all of them.
World building so far is adequate as it is just the first 20 chapters.
Great story with an original concept though I can forsee issues in the future with creating movies for the MC to act in I think it will be interesting to follow. Love it so far.
Updates are somewhat stable, hope for more as always.
Written at Chapter 21
This is a effing scam. Collect the money, dropped the novel, make a new one and the cycle repeats?
Shame on you.
Through its characters, the novel explores themes of identity, relationships, and the price of success. It highlights the importance of staying grounded amidst the chaos, and the struggle to maintain authenticity in a world obsessed with image. The author masterfully weaves together the thrilling journey of self-discovery with the harsh realities of the entertainment industry, offering readers an intimate look at the human side of fame.
"Top Star" is a thought-provoking read that resonates with anyone who has ever dared to dream big. It serves as a reminder that beneath the surface of glamour, there are universal struggles and the power of the human spirit to overcome adversity. This engaging tale leaves readers inspired, reflecting on their own aspirations and the choices they make along their life's path.
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