Top Star: Journey to Become a Global Star

I will be shameful here and give my novel a 5 stars. You have read my previous novels, then you will know that I am trying to write a showbiz novel for a long time and this was the piece I ultimately wrote with my current skill.

It will be a long journey and the MC will slowly reach the top. The novel would have elements from other showbiz novels like Top management and God of music but I will keep the plot as original as I can.

The start of this story is actually from a novel i had read a long time ago and then, the setting would change as soon as he enters a agency.

There would many new characters and some potential love interest but I will go with a Yandere for the main heroine.

If you have any thoughts about this novel and how can I make it more good, do tell me in the comments and please review this novel.

Exp blacker than black and darker than dark, I beseech thee, combine with my deep level. The time of leveling cometh. Justice, fallen upon the infallible boundary, appear now as an intangible distortion! Dance, Dance, Dance EXP! I desire for my torrent of level a destructive exp force: a destructive force without equal! Return all creation to cinders, and come from the abyss!

Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!!

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Oh, EXP shrouded in light Frenzied blaze clad in night In the name of the crimson demons, let the collapse of thine origin manifest. Summon before me the root of thy power hidden within the lands of the kingdom of demise!

Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!

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Crimson-black blaze, king of EXP sect, though I promulgate the laws of nature, I am the alias of destruction incarnate in accordance with the principles of webnovel creation. Let the hammer of exp descend unto me! ... Burn to ashes within the crimson.

By my efflux of thousands exp, topple this level barrier !

Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!

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The tower of exp creeps upon man's world, The unspoken faith displayed before me, The time has come! Now, awaken from your slumber, and by my madness, be wrought!

Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!

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EXP... EXP... EXP... Wielder of the most glorious, powerful, and grand exp explosion magic, My name is d!ckbutt. The blow that I am given to strike turns a blind eye to the fate of my kindred, rendering all hope of rebirth and anguish, and the model by which all forces are judged! Pitiful creature... Synchronize yourself with the red smoke, and atone in a surge of blood!

Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!

-Megumin Exp Explosion Chant(Cringe yeah, but its for EXP!)

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Don't stop me....i'm pouring all my stones here!Don't you dare!.....................................................................................................................................

First of all, the rating of this novel is mega faked. Out of the 236 current reviews, about 100 of them are fake 5 star spam. I'm not sure whether the author deletes lower revs, but well, if the post is gone then...

The grammar was pretty bad. The story was also basic and simple. Most of all, the author kept stealing plotlines from God of Music and Top Management, without even bothering to change nothing other than the name. If it was once, okay then... but it keeps happening, and with the story already average enough as it is, it makes it hard to keep reading. Literally, basically all of his ideas were directly copied off the novels. Also, I think he claimed there was an editor... but it didnt feel like it at all...

It feels like the novel has a lot of cliche and plot armor too... Not as bad as most fan fic, but... It might not be that bad if you are a new reader, and your English isnt the best, however if u read blot of online novels already, then... The characters felt like ones u see in most harems, 2d..,

Overall, the only advantage of the novel was the update speed. I really wanted to keep reading, as there is barely any celeb novels and I like them,  I really tried... but it kept making me want to turn off my phone... sorry... Plus... I especially dont like pirates...

DISAPPOINTED BY THE WORK ETHICS OF THIS AUTHOR... HOPEFULLY WEBNOVEL WILL BAN THESE KIND OF AUTHORS THAT WILL CARRY US AND THEN DROP US WITHOUT ANY HESITATION....

Chapter 1-28 is strangely familiar it's like two korean novels that i have read from chapter 14-28 is like the scene of the novel TOP MANAGEMENT where the mc was developing his second actor which this scene is just like that chapter 1-13 is just like the other korean novel which i forgot whats the title but the gist of it is that a 30 years old mediocre actor put up his effort and gain stardom his manager is also called bear and strangely their personality is the same and how they communicate and their scenes is also the same ummm author?? Wtf??

DROPPED DONT READ, DROPPED DONT READ, DROPPED DONT READ, DROPPED DONT READ, DROPPED DONT READ, DROPPED DONT READ, DROPPED DONT READ, DROPPED DONT READ