Too Bold For His Bunny

Website : qidian chinaViews : 3.25millionRating : 9.4(974)(highest I ever saw)Chapters : 252Status : ongoingRank : 8Word count : 770thousandauthor level : platinumNo of works : 2Previous work : ancient godly monarchIt's an ongoing popular novel so stats change from time to time. Guys I just checked qidian side but ratings in qidian  changed for almost every novel, so I dunno if you should believe this rating. Also ratings on my other reviews are before ratings changed, so don't blame me if you see high ratings in qidian and low ratings in my stats. Even a novel with 7.6 rating got changed to 8.8 rating, I dunno what qidian is trying to do.

Other then another story with the MC named Thomson i really like this novel :-)                                                                                          

You writing a new novel??!!! Then what about 'A warrior's path'? Will we still get updates??!!! Need answers. Gooddamng 140 characters rule!!!

It's not that bad 'disregard the reading status I went back' but it has a bunch of plotholes and the characters are shallow af. The MC is unrelatable it lacks a lot of the principles of the hero's journey (if you don't know what this is here's a link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hero%27s_journey) and it has a bunch of tangents of explanations. Idk if restarting or ending the novel right now, but I would suggest that the author continues the story and when done with the story reread, learn the mistakes, and if they still have the passion for writing, make a new one, that's my opinion thx. (P.S even though this sounds rude, read other novels and try to find plotholes and confusions and try to see how to fix them. Also judge all writing, even reviews like this one, but also remember about context) GL :)

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I am losing interest because of the new system features 😕😕😔. It could be a great novel with only the space not the system or the alchemy stuff.

But that maa felt too familiar. By then he realized the shocking and pale face of Momo and Rentap