It seems the author isn’t cultured enough 🥱No inc*$t, no lol i’s, and basically nothing else. The MC enjoys vanilla, I guess.Also, even though the grammar is good, half of the paragraph’s make no sense. Might want to get an editor or something.
Seeing that there are like no chapter comments and only one review so far... I’ll give a review because I’ve read all 13 chapters so far and it has been wonderful. Saitama fits in seamlessly into this world the author has spun with a careful hand. The grammar has small mistakes here and there but it’s high up on the quality scale. The world building has been wonderful thus far I’d recommend this book to everyone I can. If you like one piece or one punch man... this book is a must read.
This is one of the best Novels I've read on this website and I would love to continue reading if the chapters weren't paywalled.really the only thing that bothers me, is that the fights and enemies are getting more and more unrealistic with anime stuff that wouldn't exist in the real world. I think the story would've been 10x better if the Author stayed with his realistic Martial Arts approach but that's just my personal opinion. but I'm not going to pay money for Novels on qidian.I don't know how the contract looks but maybe change to a website that relies on ad revenue or something.
From when I started reading to where I am now, I would say that the concept of this story and the development is very good. The only thing holding this down would be that there are a lot of grammatical errors. So much so that I have to spend time trying to figure out what the authors means in some cases. While this takes away from the story, it isnt enough to stop me from reading this book! One advice I would give the author for improvement is obviously learning the english language, as well as trying to deepen the plot of the story! A couple examples I have from other books ive read would be that instead of the main character going through an event and then magically getting the ability to not register pain or care about pain, they make it so that the event is super discriptive and made it so that something happened to where the main character got used to pain. They describe it like, “Suwu felt like his skin was being flayed alive, his muscles being streched around his body, trying to compresses his bones into fine powder! His organs felt like they inflated so much that they were trying to rip apart his body to run away.” That type of discription. Anyway I just wanted to give my opinion because I enjoyed your story and can’t wait for you to devlop as a writer!
Garbage... You can tell that the Author didn’t want to put any real effort into making this novel.I gave up after 12 chapters.Personally, i could rant all day on this novel and still need another week before I reach a point of having nothing left to complain about.Waste of my time.Don’t waste yours.P.S. - You’ll probably find some of my paragraph notes if you decide to read, even after my warning.
Fantastic story writing love from indian🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳 bro make it in trending 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 and plz mass realse to 50 chapter to make it recommend by webnovel on front opening
Alright , I read the book til the cap 14-15 and those chapters killed me like why would the Mc let himself get stuck by a lie ? Like it was a good book by that point, the fact that he lost the handicap of being mute killed it a llitle bit but those chapters killed me, I will read a few chapters more but if there isn't a good explanation I will need to drop the novel
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