My review just personal opinion. It was well written story with nice world building and brilliant premises than other transmigrate in another world novel. BUT , I DECIDED TO DROP IT ! , The reason is:1. Author seem still trying tuning his story with asking reader opinion what to do. For some people it was plus because author's interactive, for me it's a mess! 2. He decided not to add harem. Maybe you will find this is good. Harem just make mc idiot or something. Let me tell you bro, it like the author wasting free resources, cultivation story is boring enough, level up then fight, level up again, why you stripped it from harem. Harem is a spices for MC boring life. It's his second chance!So for now that was my review. Maybe i will read it again when he adding HAREM tag 🖐️.Lastly im man of culture, im gonna say : able man without harem is like seeing pokemon but you had no pokeball. U know that feel bro?
What a nice book. It's really amazing I appreciate your hard work. I know it's not easy to write. That's why I rate it 5 Star. I'm expecting more. Keep it up
The story is alright, there are some grammar mistakes here and there but not to many, not a bad read but isn't an amazing one either. I think with a little more work, and editing it can be a pretty decent read. Keep it up the more you work on this the better you'll Improve. That's all I got to say but this is a pretty ok story, keep up the good work.
He also make big progress in Nutrients Storing (note:I first wrote it as accumulation now I will change it to NS(Nutrients Storing) to make it specified.),he felt energetic and productive this only help his training progress improve and the difficulty twice.
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