TO BE FRANK

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gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

as of 7 chapters all I can say that it has ridiculously good grammar and a unique concept. I'm sure the power system would be great, but only if it was explained, I might be saying this too early cuz he might explain it later, but I feel that if he told it later that it would be too late. I feel like the author is skipping a lot of scenes, cuz a lot of the flow doesn't feel natural, like him meeting basically god to just ending up in a baby body being tortured, or a fight that was about to ensue and next chapter has basically forgotten about it. the synopsis is useless, cuz I'm ch 7 and the only thing that has appeared from the synopsis is the name Michael, he wasn't even a game developer

Después de bastante tiempo al fin puedo continuar leyendo esta historia la cual me hace tener emociones de todo tipo junto con los personajes.