Tied Together By Love ✓

I love this book. I don't normally post reviews but this book has captured my attention enough that I want to continue reading it. 30 chapters are just not enough. one extremely great thing about this book is that except for some few things, the author actually know what he is talking about. Specially about programming. it's rare to find such book. Normally the flaws would have stopped me but this is just too good.Good work author. Thank you for this masterpiece.

At first glance, this seems very similar to "Scholar's Advanced Technological System" which I was enjoying a great deal until the Author started America and Trump-bashing, at which point I dropped the story. Anyway, this protagonist is blessed with an ability that lets him instantly quantify anything that he comes across. It is less versatile than the system possessed by "The Scholar," but at least he doesn't have to complete missions and listen to a snarky system try to undercut his sense of self-esteem every which way.

To be honest, there are two things you need to fix. Firstly, the use of punctuation for some of the dialogues, it'd be better if you insert commas.Secondly, you always repeating the action but also including it in your dialogue e.g. He sighed. "Sigh..."In this situation, if you already wrote the character's action, you don't need to express it in the dialogue because readers could tell the character was sighing

I have been mostly enjoying the story. I have quite an ability to suspend disbelief and just go along with the flow of a story. I like the characters, the backstories and families. But the writing is killing me. Since I started reading web novels, I have gradually acquired the ability to ignore typos and poor grammar to a large extent, but since stories magically turn into three-dimensional movies or holograms in my head, I have great difficulty with behavior of characters that seems preposterous or caricaturish (if that is a word.) They kick me out of my 3D movie and remind me that this is just words. The main character laughs and chuckles every second time he opens his mouth, frequently described as "lowly"." To quote Inigo Montoya, "You keep using that word. I do not think it means what you think it means." Lowly = of humble or base birth. It has nothing to do with sound volume. Also people sigh, loudly, frequently. In real life people sigh because they are frustrated, disappointed, depressed or really tired, and it's considered rude or a comment. One character laughs then sighs two seconds later. Another sighs, chuckling. Try doing that. It's not possible. The worst one is the use of the word "softly" with just about every smile in the first 20 chapters. Softly implies intimacy. Smiling softly is something you would do during a touching moment with a loved one, or while looking down at your newborn baby. It's not something a stranger does to someone they meet the first time for an interview. Reading the softly smiling over and over again gave me the creeps, like I'm reading about a serial killer softly smiling at the knife he just used to slice the throat of his latest victim, or fondling the organ he removed as a trophy. Yuck!!!! Author, please learn the many different types of smiles, and that the only time people laugh so much when they interact with others is when they're nervous, flirting, or are Santa Claus, paid to say ho ho ho. If you could remove the strange emoting the characters are doing, I'm sure I could spend most of my time enjoying my 3D movie of your story. I suggest you do some people watching. For instance, you don't talk about hand gestures at all. A lot of people talk with their hands. They also fiddle with their hair, and touch things and people around them. You also don't mention body language at all. I don't mean that you have to add all of those at the same time, just sprinkling in a little of all of them at different times brings characters to life.

Three phrases: I lost the sense of Time, my mind was fresh and relaxing when I read, The world is immersive and the system of cultivation is wonderful.

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when are the new chapters man come on like bruh this is an alright sequal I wanna finish it but I can't  because there are no new chapters it makes me sad ):

and for that I thank you.