Thrown into the abyss of a new world

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

Judging by the hole in the satellite picture

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

The first thing I see a cover that needs some working, I am sure you could use an AI program to make your work stand out and more attractive, the synopsis could use some work to draw your users in. *Please note I only want to help you get better as I only seek to better my fellow writers* The beginning pages are very short, WN goes by 1.5k to 1.6k depending so I assume you are a new author, but it is interesting I hope you continue to do what you love.

Too much similarities of story and plots with other novels. it's boring

I love this book.  It has the vibes i love. The author keeps me craving fir more. Good job author.  I recommend this book to other reades . This is good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Heya! GlaringError here! Thank you for giving this book a chance! :)So this is my second book on WN. Those who know me and read my first-ever book exceeding 100 plus chapters (TRA) know how I write stories. Even after writing so many chapters, I would say I am not yet as experienced as others on this platform who have been writing for years.Still, I will do my very best to write an amazing story that I would feel proud of sharing with you all! Hence my 2025 WSA entry with this book!I have learned a lot about writing and storytelling these past 7 months since TRA started, and I will say that all that I have learned I want to apply in this story! There were many mistakes that I made as an amateur writer which I want to improve on with this book. Basically, this book is a younger brother of my last work. Is it connected or not? No comments.I hope you enjoy it. :)About the story:It's a story in a very modern setting. It is about a VR game, but it's not played as a normal MMORPG. I have experimented with a lot of elements here... You will see if you read it. The idea was with me for a long time in my life, I hesitated before putting it into writing. I don't know... it just felt like it was too close to me, and no matter how I write it, I will not be able to do it justice.But I gotta try!It's a really big story—well, in my mind, it is. I will have to see how it goes before I build tons and tons of lore. :)Oh yeah! The MC has a genetic problem and can't speak. He uses sign language. This element is dedicated to one of my closest friends in school who also has the same condition. He was quite popular though, and he helped me, a poor introvert blob, quite a lot in surviving high school... We loved reading and finding interesting books together from the library. :)