Throne of Flame and Shadow

I never expect he really wont be flabbergasted by the event happening. Since I have been watching him for a long time now. But, O viewers, I am not a stalker, just a 'Narrator' doing a good job of his. ( You ARE indeed chosen 'M.C' by me to be brought to my world called Magination. I will continue my job and have you moved to my world. You wont be able to return to 'Earth' anymore and none will ever remember your existence there, even your own mother.)

4. Find persons of peace, with whom they will start....

"Room service!" A woman in a hotel staff uniform, holding a trolley of what looked like a feast of food said as soon as I opened the door.

"Did you bring me back home on the day Alexa was kidnapped? I remember seeing her car. And I must have blacked out because the next thing I remember is waking up in my own bed." I quickly explained to him the details of my realistic dream I had on that day.

A solid novel with well-crafted descriptions and a good sense of realism. The attention to detail adds depth to the scenes, making them engaging. Keep up the good work, though there is still room for improvement