MC gets an op absorbing ability, only absorbs like 2 things. Constantly loses until he comes back, loses again, then comes back and plot armor kicks in. Disappointing.
Good start-up story, but as it progresses, i find the MC quite dumb to the point of not even being to domineering -- a quality dragons possess innately. He easily submits to negotiations, suffers humiliation and let's grievances pass. And to think that he will be an 'INVINCIBLE DRAGON EMPEROR'...what a letdown.
First: Good story, it is certainly interesting, and really great.Second: THE MAIN POINT - FIX YOUR GRAMMER PLEASE!!!Seriously, this book is amazing, and its story is currently rivaled by your terrible grammar in the first few chapters that I have read so far. I look forward to reading more, but please it is as though I am reading a puzzle in many points and cannot figure out what is going on.
pure trash. for starters it is unreadable with all the errors and Grammer problems. if I'm going to pay to read something I don't want to feel like I'm proofreading a third graders creative writing project. 2nd I already read this book but it was written by Jksmanga WTH the only original part is the cat. how does stuff like this get signed and then shoved down our thoughts in recommended novels? this should be taken down error corrected and then blacklisted for plagerism
I always don't think it ethical to review my own work, but yes i'll do it. This novel is set in Arabia during medieval times of turmoil, establishments and conquests of dynasties. Our MC is a cool-headed youth with a huge responsibility upon his shoulders of rebuilding an empire, restoring a legacy and reviving the economic power of their family. I hope you love it.
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