This NPC Group is Completely Crazy [Unlimited]

Not even 100 chapters in Raws and I am already vomiting blood. I get that the Author may be a new writer (If I read machine translation correctly) But dang story-wise it's bad. I grit my teeth when he joined the 'adventure guild' . It's going further away from being 'merchant'. Just full of cliches

I couldn't make it past a few chapters. There's so much filler. It's like reading a DBZ episode where they just power up and power up some more. The story goes nowhere fast.

This story is alright.  First thing you notice is writing quality, which is poor.  It sounds like a non-native speaker wrote it.  I can't really comment on update stability, so I gave it 5 stars.  Story development is pretty basic, and I was hoping to feel...more.  It's somewhat superficial and honestly required some deeper thought.  MC's just running around completing tasks right now without thinking much.  Honestly feeling a little bored.Character is pretty basic. Props to actively choosing not to have a Harem.World background is a little disappointing at this point in the story.  There's random GM interference to make the journey harder for the MC.  It seems highly unnecessary.  Also, he decided to add Gods and God's apostles early and make the MC into one, which seems a bit much.  I don't know. Honestly just expect more, since the story has a lot of potential.

I think this is a good book but I'm dropping it since it takes so long to update............................................................................................................................ .......

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