Third Eye Hustle

I havent been able to get on for three days!!!!!! ThIs is the last book I will be reading on this sight.  I didnt know when i started reading this book that i would have to wait 12 hours before the next chapter!

From the start to the recent chapters the story has flowed quite well with no jarring plots, its been written brilliantly, the world building has been done well as well but has to have a qualitative upgrade once more worlds are introduced, the human cultivation system while it might draw in readers because of the new beast system but is actually quite limiting, with barely the good soul world bearers having a chance at a high level and the rest having to accept mediocrity, body refining cultivation has now been introduced which is a good start already and with the mc being of a stronger race im guessing he'll also cultivate with that races system and bloodline which again would be a stronger system, when his bloodline awakens i hope the bloodline itself grants him a way to cultivate the way the celestia race does atleastFor a book which the author says will only have about 1000 chapters we're alraedy almost 30% through with only about a year gone and no actual personality change in the mc, but just teenage growth, if the mc doesnt change much this story will somehow end up with an mc with a teenagers personality, no special personalities like being a sadist, womanizer, cold, evil,lazy, chilled out,and the chaotic good ones etcWhat we have is a person who nice and at best hot blooded for battle which is too basic for an mc hes basically got aside characters personalityTHe side charactets dont pose much attachment and are disposable in the sense the mc will leave them behind, hopefully that changes when he reaches a stronger race and makes friendsCompleting this story in 700 chapters kinda feels jarring, i expect multiple time skips to achieve that which i dont want to see in quick succesion, hopefully the author decides to keep taking it at a slow pace and extend the novel to about 1500 chapters atleastTHe time flow needs a revamp, with the soul powers issue dealt with, and body refining being a long term thing, we dont need a day to day story, time can flow faster, if i ignore everything and just look at how at almost 300 chapters we've only had almost 1 year passing i must say its one of the world time passage sequences written, with there being no reason to have the mc start growing to the top in just a few years, and with him potentially having a long life span, the time definitely has to flow fasterIn essence except these minor issues  to be dealt with the story itself is quite nice and has good potential the only thing to avoid i guess is an over fixation on the human race and making it reach the top, too many books have done that, and frankly books that dont focus on races to take up and focus on the mc and his companions and stuff as people more have a better plot

This is the best one out of all the novels this round..                                                                                                         

Is English not your first language? this is an unreadable mess.  Run on sentences, no paragraphs, no proper quotations and separations for spoken words.  I mean what I was able to read seemed like it might be good but the atrocious grammar ruins it completely.

"This is the school's medical wing and i'm the head nurse here. You can address me as Mrs. Wax."

- Soap take out the machine guns so the loyalists can storm the building.

This made Aldrin hesitate wondering if he should continue forward or turn around and go a different direction.

2. No Plots (I'm too lazy to create)