I find the plot of story to be interesting enough to read it. However, I feel as if the translations has been done through GOOGLE resulting in very poor grammer, mismatch of the words, etc. Due to these errors, I hate to say it but I can give this novel a maximum rate of only 3.6 star. I would recommend the author to translate the chapters manually or simply use GOOGLE translation along with the help of your friends if you cannot hire a translator.
I just wrote a big review and it did not save, so I'm going to cry real hard, excuse me.From the little that I have read, this novel is quite ordinary in its premise but quite promising nonetheless. World background: from the little I've seen, Author-san shows us their world and society with actions more than with long descriptions, so that's pretty nice. Can't say much about story development yet, but what I can say is that my attention was properly hooked up and I can't wait to see more from it.Character Design: I think it's a bit early to review this topic since the characters were not truly flashed out yet. However, they do feel unique and discernable from one another and not a bunch of mindless puppets.Writing Quality: It always feels a bit hypocritical reviewing this topic on stories from non-native speakers, because I'm too learning the language. There're some small typos and weird sentences but they did not compromise my reading experience. What did stand out for me were some complex( in a good way) sentences that were well made contrasting with the weird ones, but that's natural, just a bit peculiar.THE BIGGEST TOPIC: I don't know how or why, but what I can see in this novel is a lot of care and love from Author-san on writing this. They wish to share the same happy feelings they feel when doing all this and I think that's quite a good mentality. Always answering questions and engaging with readers. Suggestions: It's easy to say ' get an editor' but's not easy to do it. So here is my small type that I hope can help you. When you write on the author's note the explanation of something you felt confusing, that's a sign to go back and try redoing it. Sometimes we write something so obvious on our heads that we do not make it explicit in the text. It's a hard process to imagine what others will think when reading your text but I think it does help.Keep the good work!
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Great premise, with interesting characters. There are only a few chapters so can't give an accurate review. But reading the first 30 chapters, the plot looks promise. The romance is subtle and the pace is slow at first. The grammar could be improved, hopefully, the author updates more frequently. The power system is also very interesting, looking forward to how it unfolds. Maybe I will come back later and binge.
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With him were Ray and King. The girls had taken a different carriage. After they were forced into that room back at the elven mansion place. They were stuck in that room for what seemed like hours. When finally someone came to take them out. It was a younger elf. He did not hold a cold attitude like the guards. But, he did not seem to be any weaker.
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