Excessive wish fulfilment, without logic. Stupid decision to justify plot.Eg. Sell pill > make easy money > plot demand lack of money (for capsule) > Make stupid reason to get money when he is still loaded (25k in account and need 1k). Somehow trying to justify situation. I tolerated this novel to my limit. I just cant continue it anymore.
[spoiler alert] [You’ve been warned]Honestly this is really unique I’ve been reading novels from chinese/koreans/japanese since 2017 and I came across a lot of good novels with amazing plots but none of them made me crazy for just one more extra chapter like this novel..All I’m gonna say is this one is gold no DIAMOND I really love the world building or more like universe here lol coupled with the great planning ahead of the chapters made it really easy for me to visualize the story the author took his time in the first volume and it really paid off but dw after the first vol. the actions will keep unfolding one by one so sit back and enjoy this read also one of the most thing I enjoyed about this webnovel is the whole concept of the virtual games it’s not like those VR MMORPG games in other novels it’s way too different it’s like an arena with participants from all across the galaxy not just earth fighting for their lives just for the small chance of winning and obtaining unimaginable rewards and viewers who bet for their favorite player also there’s a lot of different types of games starting from sports like racing , fishing and there’s even puzzle games where you can use your abilities to overpower others or make alliances with other participants if you’re in a disadvantage and obv there’s ELO and you get your own rank ranging from bronze to diamond (dw there’s a lot more in depth details but I don’t wanna spoil it so dw about it being lame it’s quite the opposite ) all in all the VR games are only a small part of the whole novel so if you’re still here reading this idk what more do you want JUST DO IT go ahead and start reading this masterpiece ( I didn’t really comment about the English in this novel cuz it’s my second language so I couldn’t give an accurate review but I didn’t really feel like it was awkward reading it nor did I notice any bad grammar or so and yeah that’s enough for me to rate it 5/5 )
I have infinite dislike for authors who write about technical topics having absolutely zero experience and understanding of those... Programming is, unfortunately, my cup of tea and what is written about that in this book makes me kek inside... TLDR.: Facial recognition algorithm in 58 lines of legitimate no-library-using code; ten times more efficient than 200 something lines model algorithm...
Extremely boring. It's basically a rehash of coiling dragon. What's with all the zero chapter read five star reviews dominating the front page...My biggest problems with the story are pacing, followed by poor world building and one dimensional characters.Mentioning a city with tens of millions of people, how many thousands of cities, provinces, worlds and star systems there are do not equat to world building. You have to show that the world around you matters. Did your mc lost his flying bison in a city and it's so vast you can't find it? If not, than it doesn't matter how many hundreds of millions of people are in the city, they are but numbers and irrelevant and GOD, is the entire world in this story so irrelevant! It seems like nothing is happening in the world unless the mc is interacting with it. There are no sense of realism there. Mc lives in a castle, goes to some other castle, kills someone as a mission, comes back, mopes around in his castle because that's how you run a city, and voila he's the strongest in the world and goes to some place and...God the story lacks pacing and so many poorly done time skips. Show that passing of time matters before you do a time skip, not just when you need a powerup and can't find a way to engage your readers. ISSTH did a hundred year skip and I wasn't mad because before that I was with the mc on his day to day adventure, learning how important a day can be. And god the time skips in this story are so lame. He basically goes from zero to hevean rank in a few dozon chapters and heaven to legend in a couple more and by a hundred he achieves transcendence, the level that author introduced to be strongest at the start of the story. How do you keep writing once you've done that? Why, do a dbz twist, introduce a few more levels.And do you know how many interesting things happen to his life in the time he gets op as fk? You can count them on one finger, that's four if you are lazy, and god this story is so lazily written!You know, you can still feed on a lazily written, poorly paced story in a vacuum world, if the characters and their banters make up for it, and believe it or not, author fks that up really spectacularly. The characters have no depth, no complexity, no autonomy, no agency. They just exist to fill up a space. The two loving parents that got in trouble to motivate the mc, the cute lil bro to motivate the mc, the backstabbing gal to motivate the mc and hype the mysogonist fan base, none of them serves any other purpose and once you realise how utterly robotic and dull the characters are, how do you connect with them in any way? At least make up for their lack of personality with quips or humor but no, it's a serious story. A seriously dull story.And fk this Alice trope. When you have less personality than a side character with no dialogue, you don't get the girl, deal with with.
So far, I am greatly enjoying this read overall. Reading a novel that is written by an English speaking writer is certainly a different experience than a translated story or a foreign writer. That is not to say that I don't enjoy a foreign read, but the difference in colloquialisms and overall vocabulary mastery is quite different and a nice change of pace.
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