The World of Eclipsed

I gotta say I never thought someone would put this much work into a book, thanks, this is awesome. Please don't drop this book, especially the world setting, it's awesome.

At least MC has some brain cell. And plot has progressed.

This story is amazing I love first person story’s keep up the good work just maybe all the I’s you can fix and use other words because it’s a bit repetitive but it’s really good