Overall a good start, the author certainly has talent. However the development would benefit from some adjustments. Sometimes following between the chapters is a bit difficult. This is something that can certainly be improved. Apart from that it is interesting. I think that this story has great potential.
haven't read something as amazing as this in a while, honestly a 10/10 😻. the impeccable style of writing and everything are giving, it's a great story ❤️u200d🔥
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