The World in a Box

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This story is very good. The scenario has a uniqueness to it that I haven't seen from any other apocalyptic stories. The characters have all been interesting. Their designs have been mostly cool, especially the mc. The abilities of the characters have been cool and I'm curious how they will grow as the story continues. There's the occasional spelling or grammar mistake but it isn't too distracting. When it comes to updating the chapters I can't say much. As of writing this it's been months since the last update. It's a great story and I would love to see how it develops.

(Writing this about five chapters in)The prologue starts off mysterious and overall intriguing, making me want to continue onto the next chapter right away. In terms of the writing quality, it is highly-detailed and immersive; lending an smooth visualization of the world the characters are in. The characters themselves are interesting, human in the fact that they are flawed.

At first glance, this novel is just like any other novel Xianxia, an MC seeking power in a world filled with dangerous beasts and selfish cultivators.However, what is different here is that the MC is not a super genius with a cheat cultivating technique that overpower everybody, don't get me wrong, he is strong and has some cool OP skills, but he won't get an easy time in his journey.Expect to see an MC facing hardships, committing mistakes, and struggling to overcome stronger foes, and expect as well see him growing.PS.: This is my first attempt at writing, so the beginning is no as good as it should be, but I promise that the quality is improving in real-time.PS2.: English is not my first language, and it had been 10 years since I last studied grammar properly, so you may see some grammar problems, but I am back studying English and these problems will be fixed in time.Give a chance to this novel, leave a comment and review.And thanks to all of you who read this novel.

I find the actual story to be decent, not anything great but not anything terrible either. The only reason I gave the story a 2.6 overall rating is because of character development and character plot. I personally think this whole tournament arc is useless to the story and the fact that in this story, power is everything and it somehow makes the whole situation with his mother and siblings ok, that kind of character development isn’t really my cup of tea.

Finally it’s out!!!!! i’ve been waiting for this novel for a long time. You must read this!!! This is like a female version of Saitama from Onepunch Man 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 10 ⭐️

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