The story is chill but MC is not very likeable....Also the interactions with the girls are cringe. I mean the story writing feels childish and lacking depth overall. The overall concept is great and if it was written better it would be a solid story.
Great book, great writing and superb character development. The journey we experience along with the MC from the baby arc in the beginning through the academy arc. The book stays consistent with writing and develops the world beautifully. We experience the MC gradually develop into what is considered a healthy and fulfilled person while also searching for meaning to his existence. 5 stars all day long
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A girl appeared from behind a huge tree in front of the twins. She was a stricking beauty with a wavy snow white hair matched with a pair of deep ocean blue eyes. Her facial features could make people wonder in awe as she looked like a girl that had walked straight out of a beautiful painting.
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