I think it’s a great book that need little to no major corrections but maybe introducing a new side-character that has some unique connection to Master Magi. One minor thing that I think you could add is his Dragon Horned Rhino evolves into a ‘purer’ form of a dragon and gains some special ability only for earth dragons. The last thing you should keep doing is adding the snotty rich kid type that get always seems to get whooped in the end. Its been great reading this book and I hope you add a second part.
hey author is he just do flings or take them as there lovers? I don't like flings in all the novel, 1 to 2 is ok but after that is not my thing in novels.
Absolutely fire, especially the hotei scenes, and how well written it is, it connects directly to hear, specially the character of Annika... Absolutely recommended, a masterpiece written by a genius author...
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