The world and the arcs as of ch83 are descriptive and well built. The story pacing is okay. But my main problem is that the Mc for a genius has a brain that isn't functioning most of the time. This is mostly done to hinder the Mc development and standing and getting some suspense into the story. I have no problem with dumb Mc's, I am quite fond of Luffy(One Piece) after all, but I hate it when an author tries to sell me an idiot as a Genius. And he is seemingly only made an idiot to limit his op ability.
An excellent novel for anyone who wants to read something worthwhile in this genre. The author really thinks a lot about the characters and the world they live in. Scenes are entertaining and well written. Keep up the good work!
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