In over 20 chapters of this novel I only liked when the mc read the comments on his review of the technology. Translation wise it is fine. I just don't like the story or the characters. The mc and pretty much everyone he meets annoys me. For whatever reason this story also has to glorify the mc by using misunderstandings for people to think the mc is better than he is. I would much rather the story put a large focus on the reviews and the tech. Maybe this happens later but I don't wish to continue reading to find out.
So fking GOOD!!!! Ahh, i feel i just found my ideal novel what i have been looking for months now!!! It feels so good, black tech in a cultivation world, and a lots of great reaction from people meeting it and discussing about it! I really like how people marvel about these technological things, its so COOL!!! Everything was decent, i found no serious problems with the grammar! The updates i hope will be fast as lightning as im addicted to this shiet now!! I hope we will get to know more about the background of the world he is in.........and maybe a goal for the MC as he seems to just be, use his system and thats it. I did not really manage to assemble the MCs personality yet, as till the 20th chapter the system, game and the people using reacting to them were in the limelight! I cant wait to read more, as this has a great potential and is seriously FUN at least for me!! Give it a try, i dont think you will regret it!!!!
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