The weavers Legacy: Harry Potter

amazing story so far I'm really enjoying it and also so far it's been one of the best GOT Fanfics I've ever read about the harem I really want these girls to be added to the harem Arwen Galadriel Hèra, the daughter of King Helm Hammerhand I know the first two will be possible if it's the Lord of the Rings movies but I want the Lord of the Rings series to be adapted rings of power but I know that with the author's power everything is possible

Author I hope you read this.My true rating is 4.4 but I saw your pitiful overall rating so i decided to improve it a little. It is a good dungeon novel but not enough to be on the top. I think your fighting scene is too long and sometimes you took atleast 10 chapters for just a mini boss fight to conclude. One more thing, I don't particularly like your dungeon set up, it's chaotic and there is no order and logical reasoning on it, Like glaze to forest to interior of the caste? to interior of the castle? to an Ice cavern? last one, your dungeon is already in the cold environment and then the theme of your dungeon is still cold. And I know that Niflheim is on the title but dude, make it warmer. Imagine, you can find a warm place in the coldest place/continent which is the dungeon. It will lure more adventurer for its uniquenes, relative to the environment. If you know Danmachi you can get my point.Remember, a dungeon novel is a sandbox novel, so make a world.Good Luck. I'am writing and giving reviews so I can improve my english. So pls rate my english.

Great book..my favourite chapters for now are 11 and 12 😉