Ok, first off, let me negate all the low ratings. Secondly, I know that a lot of people have been gathering hate for this in the past few days (weeks) because of the fillers and the romance.Well let me tell you. This Is A Classic!It occured to me that the author is now aiming for this novel to have a tv series adaptation going by feel and nature of this story.As a classic CN would have that "classical" feel of love on the battlefield, a true polymerization of Action and Romance, a blend of youthful vibes and adrenaline if all kinds, a combination of....Ak pui~ who am I kidding!? This is a Korean Drama for pete's sake!Read this novel and you'll get a girlfriend, that's all I have to say.
5 stars!!!! You deserved it author.... good job!I always love transmigration and face slapping,.. and this one give me all that i want... so brutal... I'm excited to see how many villainess will be slapped real hard. LOLKeep it going.. Ill be following this one
I want to say this is a good novel, because I did enjoy reading it. However, all I actually read was about 15 chapters of the MC sitting around and simulating without actually doing anything, interspaced with 4 chapters of arrogant young master types. Flawed novel, good read. Anyone have the correct raws?
Writing Quality⭐⭐⭐⭐Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐⭐Story Development⭐⭐Character Design⭐⭐World Background⭐⭐I tried really hard to like this story.My biggest problem with the story is that it feels like its going nowhere.I feel like MC has no goal like noting to go for there also seems to be no enemy. So we just wave along with whatever is going on.I read like 270 chapters in 2 days and i can sum up what happens in a few lines.I feel like there is no substance in this story. MC just does stuff that's about it.We barley see MC fight we have noting to root for i think there are like 15 fighting chapters maybe less where MC is fighting. And when a fight happens MC is NEVER there. He is always comprehending some ****ty law or cultivation or whatever.So we get like 6-7 chapters of forgotten characters that fight and get like 1-2 where MC does something. MC also vanishes from the story for like 5+ chapters and we are like why do we need this info again?There are also some really stupid stuff going on like:- MC fell 5 minute's straight and had no injury what so ever (he was like just starting to cultivate to)Then he uses all his qi to fly up and he could not go more then 50m and fell down again.But 2 days later he can fly all the way up (like 300km) I think he was 8 grade mortal to like 5 grade second thingySo you are telling me he has 600 times more Qi now then he had b4?(also does not take him long to get to the top)-MC is flying up a mountain 15000feed (less then 5km) but it takes him 5h so you are saying me he is flying 5x slower then the average human walks?Then the next time he is flying super fast again its all over the place.He could fly 300km up a pit but he can't fly for a few km again next time cuz his Qi was out when he has allot more Qi now.-And don't get me started on the trails / dreams / ... we get like chapters upon chapters of random filler character fighting we never see again.-And After his first trail they said he will need to do another one at 20% of his bloodline yet now it looks like he will need to do it at 5% for no reason whatsoever.-... ...Then lets talk about MC.- He is fairly stupid makes retarded mistakes (obv stuff)- Should act evil when he acts more normal barley kills anyone - Cultivates like a hard demon cultivation thingy when all it accomplishes is to restrict mc do do certain stuff.-Also i was hoping for there to be some romance but MC is a blockheadAlso don't get me started on MC secrecy. Hides his cultivation from his family for 270 chapters when all they do is worrie for him. Like they are not bad people like you might think they will backstab him or whatever.Even if its only to his grandpa & mother but NOOO he can't tell them shit . They took care of him when he was a retard for 6 years then again when he was training (aka not moving) for another 3/4 years. Yet he can't tell them he is strong and moving all over the place they still think he is a weak shit.We also know noting abut the world. Like all i can say you is eummm i think there are more continents.oo Yea and the last one, there is so much F I L L E RIdk there is so much more that pisses me off but ill stop here.
I gave it 5 ratings earlier but I changed my mind. The story is greatly marred by unnecessary cringey romance, which could've been kept for 2 chapters max. The budding rivalry between the siblings was making this novel interesting but the author wants to cater to Wattpad and AO3 sort of readers. The FL is not even well written tbh. If it was the guy instead of the girl who kept chasing despite getting rejected many times, the readers would be calling him a creep. The author has tried to make her a pure hearted Goddess but she's just an annoying side character who exists to drag the story. I think I'll drop this. The romance is just too cringey. I wish it didn't have Wattpad elements.
The kid seems mc is a good guy but not. Excessively steals. He is smart but an idiot. His first hook up he plays the paramour. MC seems like he will be crazy op. When the author gave him a weakness (mana) he immediately gave him a work around.Gramatically the story is fine. I just think the story isnt for me.
It's really awesome and I like Dragons .Man they are so cool.I also started writing a new novel "Flighters" . Am new and Don't know if it's good or not .please help me review it . I hope I can learn from you
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