The Wealthy Man's Wife is His Weakness!

I like the novel, but at the same time get really annoyed by it.The writing style consists of repeating itself and going in circles which causes very little progress is made in a lot of chapters.The MC is arrogant petty and once showed his superiority by basically argueing with a 5-year old by being more childish.Overall: I like the powersystem and the world but the writing and characters not.

160 chapters reviewthe novel is good at the beginning but the pace is very slow the magic system is quite organized although I don't like the fights they take too long they explain too much and the MC is traumatized for having killed people who deserved to die.He has personality problems from his past on earth; also people are extremely talkative the protagonist just says ah ah and they respond like 56 paragraphs trying to change MC way of thinking I don't understand how this happens, but is annoying. instead I would like more worlbuilding explaining how the world works.

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The translation is a bit iffy, words change every few chapters. But, the whole novel is centred around comedy. The system and the levelling up is not the focus of this novel, if you were looking for some system focused novel, then this is not for you. The hilarious scenarios and the weird aspect is what got me hooked. If you just ignore the system words that change every now and then, it's a good comedy novel.

『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』I think it's alright if I rate your novel 5 stars right?After all what reader and fellow author in their right mind would hate your beloved own child?!All I wanna say is, thank you for writing your novel. Please keep on fighting on, my friend!Have a wonderful day.『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』

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Seems you you were originally a prototype game fan , but you actually added to the idea an original twist that makes predicting the story very hard , and that makes it really an interesting read