The narrative is fantastic, with well-developed characters possessing depth and personality. However, I felt that the ending was hasty and forced. I would have appreciated a more in-depth exploration of their conversations and interactions after the conflict, perhaps through additional chapters. Many readers might be put off by the main character's (ML) relationship with his partner, but here's a spoiler:
The ML doesn't actually date his partner for love; he uses them as a pawn to catch the antagonist. Their relationship isn't as affectionate as portrayed earlier. The ML has loved the protagonist (MC) since childhood, and his actions aim to clear the MC's parents' name. What I admire about the ML is that he's not the self-sacrificing type; he believes it's better for them to die together than for one to survive alone, causing pain. He deeply regrets making the MC feel hurt when he saw them with his "fake" partner and even experiences trauma from the MC's disappearance.
In the climax, the ML catches the MC, they argue or communicate, and eventually, they become intimate. They form a unique bond where sharing their life forces means if one dies, the other follows. The story doesn't delve into the specifics of their remaining time together, but they find happiness in their reconciliation and decision to live as a couple.
Overall, despite the initial partner storyline, which might upset some, I found the story compelling and engaging. The MC's badass nature, despite his depression, adds an interesting dynamic. I enjoyed it so much that I paid for the completed chapters, giving it a solid 5/5 rating.
I am deeply impressed by the author's skill in handling a delicate theme in their novel. They expertly reject the idea of selflessness that borders on selfishness, while maintaining empathy for characters coping with trauma and self-destructive behavior. Although the premise revolves around a terminal illness, the protagonist's actions reveal self-harm and suicidal tendencies, particularly after a significant event involving manipulation by the love interest (ML).
What stands out is the narrative's approach, which does not place blame on the ML for the protagonist's actions but acknowledges them as a result of the ML's actions. The story emphasizes that trying to protect someone without giving them agency to share burdens and make their own decisions is actually自私. This message is reinforced through instances where other characters compare the protagonist's self-sacrifice to the ML's.
However, the ML is portrayed as an antagonist, lacking remorse, and the story ends abruptly. I hope the additional content provides closure. Ultimately, the MC and ML are shown to love each other selfishly, albeit from vastly different perspectives. The translator's work is commendable, but I must admit, I would prefer a different choice of words for a specific term mentioned in a sexual context.
In its own unique way, this is quite entertaining. I actually enjoy this genre, so the concept of a "wife chasing" story set in a crematorium doesn't bother me at all. It's not meant to provide profound insights, but rather caters to those who appreciate angsty themes.
The main character's perspective is quite unreliable, which becomes apparent early on. Despite being powerful, kind, and respected, he has low self-esteem, which affects his understanding of others' perceptions. For instance, the male lead (ML) is deeply fixated on the MC, to the point of offering to harm someone from their past, all before becoming a guild master. There's also a guild member whose jealousy ML misinterprets as his usual cold and antisocial behavior, when in reality, it stems from the MC's affection for the other person.
The MC seems oblivious to ML's possessiveness, and there might be more to the ML's relationship with his alleged partner than meets the eye. It appears to be a potentially manipulative contract. The MC is heartbroken by the unrequited love, and given ML's manipulative, obsessive, calculating, and controlling nature, it's concerning. It's possible that ML故意 uses harsh words to manipulate and hurt the MC, without realizing the full extent of his actions.
I'm curious about how ML's behavior will change once he learns about the MC's limited life expectancy, a result of the MC sacrificing himself for the guild, which is essentially ML's career. It's a complex dynamic that promises further emotional turmoil.
Hello there, if you seek an honest critique, this review isn't for you. Prepare yourself for an unfiltered opinion and a spoiler alert.
To be frank, I question my own masochism for delving so deeply into the story. Throughout, I found myself shouting at the protagonist, urging them to stand up against the manipulative character – it was exhausting. The sexual scenes were highly uncomfortable to read, and there were quite a few. Both the main character (MC) and love interest (ML) lack any redeeming qualities; I cannot change my stance on this, even if you disagree.
I had hoped for a similar experience to "Kill the Villainess," but the ending couldn't have been more different. In that series, the MC dies along with the ML, only to be reborn in an alternate universe – their origin point. The plot revolved around men (excluding the ML) who refused to accept rejection, attempting to pursue the MC through manipulation. Ironically, the ML shares traits with those characters, making me wish for the MC's escape from his grasp. But alas, the MC was also trapped in his love.
The quote "If I think of this sorrow as love too, I can endure it" resonates, but not in a positive way. I found myself rooting against them, wanting both to suffer.
To sum up, this story doesn't appeal to my taste. I continued reading out of curiosity, akin to rubbernecking at a car accident.
Regarding the ML, one reviewer mentioned people being put off by his relationship with another man. No, it's not just that. His treatment of the MC, gaslighting, manipulating emotions, chasing him relentlessly, and even controlling his life are major turn-offs. He's a terrible person, and I deeply regret investing time in this story.
Until now, it's been a bittersweet love story with a touch of angst, which I absolutely adore! I'm a huge fan of that emotional depth. I've been enjoying the writing and the main character, and this review is mainly meant to motivate the translator to continue, because I'm eagerly anticipating reading more!
The narrative holds promise, but it was discontinued when a crucial event occurred (attributable to the succubus' seal), which served as a plot point to推进主角们的关系, even though the male lead already has a partner. Despite this setback, I'll stay hopeful for the story's progression, as the author seems to be hinting at a different dynamic between the male lead and his partner.
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The ML doesn't actually date his partner for love; he uses them as a pawn to catch the antagonist. Their relationship isn't as affectionate as portrayed earlier. The ML has loved the protagonist (MC) since childhood, and his actions aim to clear the MC's parents' name. What I admire about the ML is that he's not the self-sacrificing type; he believes it's better for them to die together than for one to survive alone, causing pain. He deeply regrets making the MC feel hurt when he saw them with his "fake" partner and even experiences trauma from the MC's disappearance.
In the climax, the ML catches the MC, they argue or communicate, and eventually, they become intimate. They form a unique bond where sharing their life forces means if one dies, the other follows. The story doesn't delve into the specifics of their remaining time together, but they find happiness in their reconciliation and decision to live as a couple.
Overall, despite the initial partner storyline, which might upset some, I found the story compelling and engaging. The MC's badass nature, despite his depression, adds an interesting dynamic. I enjoyed it so much that I paid for the completed chapters, giving it a solid 5/5 rating.
What stands out is the narrative's approach, which does not place blame on the ML for the protagonist's actions but acknowledges them as a result of the ML's actions. The story emphasizes that trying to protect someone without giving them agency to share burdens and make their own decisions is actually自私. This message is reinforced through instances where other characters compare the protagonist's self-sacrifice to the ML's.
However, the ML is portrayed as an antagonist, lacking remorse, and the story ends abruptly. I hope the additional content provides closure. Ultimately, the MC and ML are shown to love each other selfishly, albeit from vastly different perspectives. The translator's work is commendable, but I must admit, I would prefer a different choice of words for a specific term mentioned in a sexual context.
The main character's perspective is quite unreliable, which becomes apparent early on. Despite being powerful, kind, and respected, he has low self-esteem, which affects his understanding of others' perceptions. For instance, the male lead (ML) is deeply fixated on the MC, to the point of offering to harm someone from their past, all before becoming a guild master. There's also a guild member whose jealousy ML misinterprets as his usual cold and antisocial behavior, when in reality, it stems from the MC's affection for the other person.
The MC seems oblivious to ML's possessiveness, and there might be more to the ML's relationship with his alleged partner than meets the eye. It appears to be a potentially manipulative contract. The MC is heartbroken by the unrequited love, and given ML's manipulative, obsessive, calculating, and controlling nature, it's concerning. It's possible that ML故意 uses harsh words to manipulate and hurt the MC, without realizing the full extent of his actions.
I'm curious about how ML's behavior will change once he learns about the MC's limited life expectancy, a result of the MC sacrificing himself for the guild, which is essentially ML's career. It's a complex dynamic that promises further emotional turmoil.
To be frank, I question my own masochism for delving so deeply into the story. Throughout, I found myself shouting at the protagonist, urging them to stand up against the manipulative character – it was exhausting. The sexual scenes were highly uncomfortable to read, and there were quite a few. Both the main character (MC) and love interest (ML) lack any redeeming qualities; I cannot change my stance on this, even if you disagree.
I had hoped for a similar experience to "Kill the Villainess," but the ending couldn't have been more different. In that series, the MC dies along with the ML, only to be reborn in an alternate universe – their origin point. The plot revolved around men (excluding the ML) who refused to accept rejection, attempting to pursue the MC through manipulation. Ironically, the ML shares traits with those characters, making me wish for the MC's escape from his grasp. But alas, the MC was also trapped in his love.
The quote "If I think of this sorrow as love too, I can endure it" resonates, but not in a positive way. I found myself rooting against them, wanting both to suffer.
To sum up, this story doesn't appeal to my taste. I continued reading out of curiosity, akin to rubbernecking at a car accident.
Regarding the ML, one reviewer mentioned people being put off by his relationship with another man. No, it's not just that. His treatment of the MC, gaslighting, manipulating emotions, chasing him relentlessly, and even controlling his life are major turn-offs. He's a terrible person, and I deeply regret investing time in this story.