I read until chapter 220 and that was all I could stand. The translation quality and grammar is fine, but there is no plot, no world building, no character development, nothing. Everything that happens in the story is completely convenient to the plot. Like for example, he needs some super rare thing to evolve his talent, and somehow he enters a random cave and finds that exact thing. This happens over and over again. Also, the author makes ZERO effort to develop any of the characters. Its almost as if all the characters are just there to create conflict; even the love interests. The worst part to me is that every plot point is dragged on and on and is so repetitive and boring. I donโt mind the same powerscaling bs and faceslapping, but this is just the same plot but repeated five times and that happens for every conflict in the story. Would not recommend.
HUGE INFODUMPS! And author constantly repeats the same thing OVER AND OVER AND OVER again.Also, one chapter he introduces a new rule of this book, later he will break this rule.Let me put it this way. The normal conversation in this novel goes like this,Mc says something.The person mc is talking to replies with unfamiliar terminology.Author takes 3 paragraphs to explain.The mc replies with unknown terminology again.Author explains using 3 paragraph again.Every conversation is a tool for the author to dump huuuuge info that will probably never be mentioned again.30 chapters in and VERY LITTLE has actually happened. But boy oh boy you probably know about half of all technical details on how fey, fey grades, fey characteristics, various companies, tools, fey cultivation plans used in this book's universe.Also, to the review that said no system, that is true. But the mc has a huge all encompassing cheat when it comes to feys. Not a bad thing per say but just mentioning.Dialogue is VERY dry because of the constant info dumps in them. So i s the exposition. And whenever any character in this story is feeling something, like happiness or anger, the author explains exactly why that character is feeling that, why the mc mad them feel like that, what the mc thinks about that character, etcetc you get my point.I mean the readers aren't dumb. the author doesn't have to explain why the mc's sister is feeling happy when the mc got her a good fey. But the author does, line by line, breaking down what she was feeling.Also, in this world it is apparently really hard for people to train something called 'runes'. But the mc just has to look in a certain random direction and recite poems. Then boom, new rune.Author said only contractors can choose skills for fey, but a few chapters later we see people choosing skill for fey not contracted to them.Author spends HUGE TIME explaining how things work, but when executing them in the book he literally throws all that out of the window and lets the characters break every rule he established.Oh and don't get me started with FEYS. Random fey appears, author takes a chapter to explain all the characteristics of that fey.Like he does that for almost every fey. Even the ones not related to mc or any major character.This is not a novel, it is one GIANT INFO DUMP or MONSTER ENCYCLOPEDIA. Not recommended.
Hello Well the author finally did it .He has finally made the storyPretty good written till now and fore shadowing is nice. Well we just need to wait for an editor now to jumpstart things
keep it up. Very entertaining story and dont drop plzzzzz. Its the only reason I am alive i.e I am alive just to read this story, just to be clear. If I dont see regular updates dont blame me for great misfortune will befall you and all your hair will start to fall and u will become bald, not even the good kind of bald just partial bald where only your top will lose hair and it probably looks ugly u know, full bald is good and all but half bald is another thing. Did you know that there are different kinds of baldness and more than 40 % of male population is bald in this world like seriously I think that in soon future everyone will become bald and like our future generation will be born bald..... now that i think about it people are born bald..... see this a premonition that we all will turn bald and return to our roots and all traces of hair will be associated with primitive people that are compared to monkeys So thats why i say that all presidents and office workers should be bald as it goes along with their image and we can separate then and know who is an office worker or an important official if u are still reading this bullshit than hats off to you man, dont you have stuff to do I mean like I am just typing bullshit to reach the word count you know... go on do something productive
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It was really good the development is peak and is very specific making you have a clear imagination of the story it has gore but it isn't that bad which makes it the perfect story combined with many other genres just perfectly. My only problem is the missing details but they aren't big enough to alter the story. Overall great story ๐๐๐๐.
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