The War Room

Napalunok ako. I wasn't comfortable. May mabigat na enerhiya sa paligid. 'Di ko maipaliwanag.

"No, no you're afraid of me." Naruto confirmed, giving a condescending smirk, "You're scared of me, that's why you want to be me. Am I right?"

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Just finished reading your latest chapter, and I have to say firstly, it's excellent—on par with what I'd expect from a seasoned author. Secondly The pacing is tight, the character arcs are progressing  the tension in the plot feels earned rather than forced. There’s a clear sense of purpose in every scene, however  If I wasn't as biased I'd say some moments could be better if you sharpen your dialogue or deeper introspection, but overall, this is a standout piece of work. 5 stars, without hesitationI highly recommend readers trying this book