The walking calamity

How can this novel gets translated while other with higher votes in the rating poll gets removed. Story progress is so slow and inconsistent. The world building is inconsistent characters are to bland and generic. None of the characters actually stand out. Even people with worse naming sense are more consistent than this one. from Bob to Valkyrie or something be consistent or in theme. The little of details can break of character. Not worth investing your read time would be better if your choose other novel compared to this.

I've been looking for this. This is the best read ive read so far since I finished The time I reincarnated as a slime(which was 2 years ago). Keep up the good work and more chapters please!!! 😍

It is a good story, definitely worth reading it. Thanks for the story, please keep posting new chapters. For all those who haven’t yet tried it you will definitely like the story

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Ahoy, ye scallywags and sea dogs, gather 'round and lend yer ears to a tale of uncharted waters and hidden treasures! I be talkin' 'bout somethin' that'll have ye swashbucklin' through the perilous seas.This be a story that'll set yer heart aflutter like the Jolly Roger in a stiff breeze. It's chock-full o' salty sea battles, where the boom of cannons fill the air, and the decks run red with the blood.Ye'll meet characters as cunning as Blackbeard and as brave as Bartholomew Roberts, keepin' ye guessin' till the very last page.But what sets this tale apart be the sprinkle of the mystical and the magical. Aye, it's as if the Flying Dutchman himself has woven tales of old into the fabric of the story.If ye be hungerin' for a story that captures the essence of piracy – the thrill of the chase, the clash of steel, and the lure of hidden riches – then this be the booty ye seek. I'd lay down me finest five doubloons for this tale, for 'tis a voyage that'll leave ye thirstin' for more.

A more “savoury” version of my review at 80 chapters: This is a peak-tier gem.Writing Quality: Pleasant- Very few grammar mistakes and a good level of dialogue-text. System text presented clearly. 5 starsUpdating stability: 1ch/day- Great in my books.  One of my only gripes with this novel though is the short chapters… some conversations spill into the next chapter which can break immersion. The release frequency balances that out so not detrimental. 4 starsStory development: There’s an established overarching goal and arc goal. It works towards meeting the arc goal with great storytelling and interesting developments and schemes in the background. Probably the best point about the novel. Lemons do not detract from the experience- in some scenes it’s described, whereas others are just post-coital conversations, something I’m grateful for! No dragging of lemons across several chapters + the novel isn’t all about seducing females to get to the top, though that is a part of the MC’s success. 5 starsCharacters: The MC is perfect! Rational, practical, good at 😏, and most of all possessive. Definitely No NTR in this novel. Other characters have been portrayed well: Bodyguard recruits are as naive as recruits, City lords are as scheming as they should be, and potential harem members are buttered up well (developments are quick but not dissatisfyingly so). 5 starsWorld Background: An easy to understand power system which is definitely appreciated! Info is disseminated in dialogues naturally and through non-chunky paragraphs. Hope there’ll be some expansion on the blackthorn kingdom and demon fronts, maybe some political manoeuvring etc in the future. 4.5 starsThe MC is an ambitious man who will scheme and subjugate [women] his way to the top. If you like this premise, then you’ll enjoy the novel for sure.

[I was made by the gods.]

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