Honestly I had a high expectation for this novel, but the author tried play smart and made the Mc a slave for a girl that he barely knew, he got injured in the most stupid way, I mean the the two Supreme dragons can talk to him, they could have warned him about it but no they decided to let him get injured seriously so they can make him a slave, it’s so forceful that I felt like vomiting when I read that part.
Let’s not forget about his sister who at first seemed to be injured then became cursed, main character doesn’t even have the body memory except for his parents being tortured and him running away.
And the main character was supposed to be smart and ruthless he couldn’t sleep because he was traumatized please, he couldn’t stand the stares he was receiving please, he almost couldn’t hold himself because of a girl please man that’s stupid.
And the worst part is the main character refusing to get stronger in a world that he knew that strength is everything because of stupid fear that he will gather attention.
I think the autho should remake it, and will not talk about the name of the novel.
The book starts off a little rough, but by the time you get to the good parts you won’t be able to stop reading. (I read 147 chapters in a single day). The characters are simplistic but grow into their plot requirements very well, the world development is realistic and descriptive. It’s clear a lot of effort has been put into this story, if it’s dropped I’ll cry myself to bed.
this novel is very good from the plot to the world building and design of characters. I particularly like mc's personality who is a psychopath because of what his family in his previous life had done to him. the writing quality is top notch too. even if the mc is op , he is not too op either and the story develop well too.
I hope you'll continue writing this great book
The story was good at the start, AT THE START!!! cool headed, have patience doesn't care about the world except her sister...
the story goes downhill the longer it goes, and it starts when he goes stronger...
I notice it when the tournament starts when Kyle Flare and Alex were fighting, his dialogue and lucas dialogue was pure idiocy.
theres was no joker that was mentioned in his personality. The dragon, snake, and the phoenix were not a joked, and even if we say that he is a substitute, he should have the conscience of the original.(NO DUMB ENTITY) and not to mention JAMES that was also one of the personality which is smart, I cannot just fathom why did he become so dumb.
and the latest chapters is just full of nonsense story...
Maybe the author lost some of his drive and now satisfied with its downhill workss...
It's good. Don't let chapter 36 (if I dont remember wrongly) fool you, even though this chapter may disappoint you with all the soul crystal thing, dont drop the novel yet. It will become better.
The only critic I would make is: the mc is not a villain so the title is misleading and all the plot exposed in the synopsis (three souls in a body and all that stuff) appears only around chapters 100-130 (and is explained quite poorly tbh).
The chapters are too short and have a lot of useless information.
There is no character development. Even though the mc went trough a lot of things and "mental breakdowns" there is no difference between him before the mental breakdown and after that. These mental breakdowns and "lessons" just serve the purpose of making you believe that the main character is growing, but he still acts and thinks the same way.
Anyway, the novel is entertaining if you can ignore or overcome the points mentioned above, so that's all that matters I guess
I read till 300 . I will be honest to develop a character taking 300+ chapters is too much. 300 chapter and lots of things happened but time moves fking slow.
writing quality is average because of constant switching between povs.
Most annoying thing is slow progression and stupidity of mc not to level up. I don't understand why some idiots tried to compare this with The Author's Pov . it can't even come close to it.
ONLY good thing about this novel is story has potential but author does best job in ruining it.
I'm complaining because of time wasted to read till here hoping it would get better but never did.
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Let’s not forget about his sister who at first seemed to be injured then became cursed, main character doesn’t even have the body memory except for his parents being tortured and him running away.
And the main character was supposed to be smart and ruthless he couldn’t sleep because he was traumatized please, he couldn’t stand the stares he was receiving please, he almost couldn’t hold himself because of a girl please man that’s stupid.
And the worst part is the main character refusing to get stronger in a world that he knew that strength is everything because of stupid fear that he will gather attention.
I think the autho should remake it, and will not talk about the name of the novel.
Good luck
I hope you'll continue writing this great book
the story goes downhill the longer it goes, and it starts when he goes stronger...
I notice it when the tournament starts when Kyle Flare and Alex were fighting, his dialogue and lucas dialogue was pure idiocy.
theres was no joker that was mentioned in his personality. The dragon, snake, and the phoenix were not a joked, and even if we say that he is a substitute, he should have the conscience of the original.(NO DUMB ENTITY) and not to mention JAMES that was also one of the personality which is smart, I cannot just fathom why did he become so dumb.
and the latest chapters is just full of nonsense story...
Maybe the author lost some of his drive and now satisfied with its downhill workss...
The only critic I would make is: the mc is not a villain so the title is misleading and all the plot exposed in the synopsis (three souls in a body and all that stuff) appears only around chapters 100-130 (and is explained quite poorly tbh).
The chapters are too short and have a lot of useless information.
There is no character development. Even though the mc went trough a lot of things and "mental breakdowns" there is no difference between him before the mental breakdown and after that. These mental breakdowns and "lessons" just serve the purpose of making you believe that the main character is growing, but he still acts and thinks the same way.
Anyway, the novel is entertaining if you can ignore or overcome the points mentioned above, so that's all that matters I guess
writing quality is average because of constant switching between povs.
Most annoying thing is slow progression and stupidity of mc not to level up. I don't understand why some idiots tried to compare this with The Author's Pov . it can't even come close to it.
ONLY good thing about this novel is story has potential but author does best job in ruining it.
I'm complaining because of time wasted to read till here hoping it would get better but never did.
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