The Villain’s Family Favorite Little Sweetheart

I don't see why so many people dislike this story. Maybe my taste in light novels is weird, maybe my criticizing side is lenient, but I've enjoyed this story very much. Its a shame there's only 40 chapters.

The synopsis is quite interesting, and the storyline is quite interesting. However, a lot of editing is needed when it comes to grammar. Other than that, it is a well-written story.

Writing Quality: 4* EnjoyableStability of Updates: 5* ExcellentStory Development: 4* I Like where it's goingCharacter Design: 4* I like how the characters look(through my imagination)World Background: 3* More will get revealed I hopeThe total score: 4.0*

Truly great strong captivates you from the start can not wait to hear more about Zero's journey excellent writing

His speed was extremely fast but he suddenly stopped as his leg was grabbed by Feng Hao.

" Maafkan aku ibu, karena aku tidak sempat pulang kerumah untuk beberapa saat. Sebab aku harus mengajar di akademi " (Lock) ungkapku dengan kecewa.

<p>"Jangan lakukan itu, Guru, aku tahu aku salah sebelumnya." wajah Fan Le segera berubah kecut, membuat Qin Wentian dan Mustang tertawa terbahak-bahak. Si Gendut ini, benar-benar tidak tahu malu.</p>

"What is it, Your Majesty?"