It has no bulls**t romance interfering with the plot! Or those goddamed damsels in distress. The characters feels alive and realistic. One of the best novel, I've read!!! It ruin all other gaming novels for me, since I'm F**king sure, none will measure up to this one!!!
The complaints of several of the readers stem from having to read a poorly written rehash of the movies that are associated with it. My complaint is more about how the character needs to do almost nothing to create 'amazing' games. So he gets a system that will make the game for him and give it to him on a portable easy to use usb device. It will even make patches and updates for him. He just asks his system to do it and it is done. No messy need to have the system upgrade his talent or ability in various areas. Just give the host the finished product.
Pretty average. I have finished reading Starting Contracts with Sprites. Both, this and that novel, are in the same niche with having pets for fighting. After reading 15 chapters only, I grew tired of this novel for having similar starting points with only the difference with the system abilities. It still didn't riled up my interest. I will give this an average score for at least making a solid novel but can't really get my interest to keep reading it. Comparing it with food, you can eat it but it doesn't have that umami flavor that will keep you from having second serving.
lol😂the MC was so chill and I already love the interactions between him and the system. It's nice to read a frenemies (?) in the beginning of the chapters so keep up the good work author👍🏻
Writing Quality, it turns out Raven is not a talking bird... It is a bit abnormal to have a female name, as a male MC... 1 Capital letter in his first chapter! no not lying its true.He has more capital letters in his review than his first chapter...Writing Quality, it turns out Raven is not a talking bird... It is a bit abnormal to have a female name, as a male MC... 1 Capital letter in his first chapter! no not lying its true.He has more capital letters in his review than his first chapter.................Stability of updates, sense the novel has just started, no comment. but sense each chapter is about 300-500? words and he wrote 6 total 2/3 chapters a week? that is extremely slow.... story development.. It might be there, but I cant really understand what im reading, so you get a 3Character design... I thought your MC was a talking bird, somehow you made him less interesting to me... two poor kids, which no goal or objective, its pretty empty---- I made the same mistake.World Background-- its a bit to early and his chapters are too small. id give him a 4 sense, I see signs of it being thought out.
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