the mc had the most infuriating personality. every 3 chapters is a repeat of 6 chapters before that just with different charecters. and at the rate the mc is going every person within a 100 miles of him will be a divine dragon. which just takes away from the story. he gives out divine dragon cultivation manuals like he is throwing bread to ducks. he gives his blood away to anyone that looks his direction. and he created another divine dragon which just shouldnt be, he is the biggest show boat nothing but the same old show boat personality, belittling people with skills given to him by the system acting like he worked hard for it. every third paragraph is a description of him having perverted thoughts. he seems obsessed with being above others at all times, and ruining people's lives just for disagreeing with him. the first 70 or so chapters were good and intertwining the rest is relative garbage with a douce and a tool of an mc
It’s a typical Chinese novel reinforcing all the Modern Chinese culture and their sneering all over. And BINGO! a Chinese auth hating Japanese, portraying them as evil. Frankly I just don’t like the idea of political hate creeping into any book that’s not historical book. Especially fantasy novels. By the amount of “Chinese medicine” solving anything plot armour throws at MC, his silence till all the side characters fill up the exposition and everyone’s sneering, short fused temper( not the Chinese novel temper, calm, deep, vigorous, spring, autumn, distinguishing gratitude, not being servile not overbearing, sharp eyebrows, and massive hard on for betting at every plot cliche) it repeats all over again. But when I saw auth bringing in Japanese to make them steal their military data, sure, the japs really need it. Anyway, you can read it to increase lethargy.
Its a good yuri novel just wish there was more character development because sometimes I forget whos who and have to double check but it has lost of good moments 4 stars
there was a lack of trying in this novel. I could tell what was going on half the time because the novel was skip from place to place like when did he learn how to use the system or what it even does it do for a matter of fact to me it seems that at the end of the chapter there was I whole chapter in between. I like the idea but the lack of work makes the novel bad even if you translate it at least look over it and fill it the blacks. This novel is a good idea but has no work put into it.
This story is a hidden gem, I was lucky to find it on the homepage of the web novel, if you are hesitating to read I can tell you that it is worth it, I am looking forward to the development of the story. congratulations author and continue with the work because it will surely be successful one day, maybe it will be fast or not then persist.
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Blood continues to flow while her vitality started to seep away from her as she forcefully get a pen and a parchment. She wanted to tell everything about him by herself but time wasn't on her side so she decided to write it all behind.
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