The Unyielding Echo

A decent concept in the story so far, but every time it gets a bit interesting it gets ruined by an annoying thing. I like the concept of the sword and dual cultivation and his low-key approach to it, but the story and characters are things I dislike. The denseness about making love (seriously?) a servent/low person in the biggest cultivation family doesn't know about it?How quickly does he fall for the sect girl he meets and ends up explaining everything to her, so much for low-key, then there is the rather stupid girl spirit talking about her husband every other line she has... Why is she even there and this gives all the signs I don't want to see in a dual cultivating novel (another dual cultivating MC. ) His naiveness about everything becomes kinda annoying to show a reason for the spirit girl character to be in the book, she is not needed and only makes the story stale, she also makes MC look stupid and lost. Why should he even trust her and listen to her and what is her role in the story? What made me stop was that even the next potential lover would be someone who had already enjoyed being with everyone in the town if not the whole country and will always be interested in finding more. I doubt I will like her either, so while there is an interesting concept here, it does not have interesting characters for me. What I would have been interested in,1- His devil side2- Swords and skills about that and his bloodlines powers etc3- Side character/ lovers who matter to his story (not some other dual cultivations wife and some lady who enjoys being with everyone on town)4- A more solid character development (now he is portrayed as Naive one second (So some of the irrelevant side characters could have a reason for existing) and partially smart/wise when the side characters are not needed)5- A much much better reason for the sect girl to like him and accept him being a devil. 6 - etc...Overall the concept got me interested in the story, but the characters made me dislike it. I would suggest that to new readers, you try reading it yourself to make a decision, but for me, I think I will stop it a third of the way.Writing Quality - 4Stability of Updates - 5Story Development - 3Character Design - 1 World Background - 3The total score - 3.2

There’s elementary-class, there’s also leader-class, and how can we forget about BOOS-class                                                

I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Chapter 14 had a very deep moment that maybe shows yonome that the way she was going is wrong and to change her act for the better

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It's a good story with a great potential. The mistake like grammar and typo is also really unnoticable. The world background is also a bit of a fresh air, especially with many cultivation novel around here. The pacing is kinda slow (at least for me) but it doesnt feels like filler yet. I do have concern about the attitude of the MC and the name of the system thoughTo be honest I try to read this novel after sering kingdom building in the title. But as the story progress I realize that the subject of the MC are probably those girls that comes from gacha and nothing more (at least until chapter 41) . That limits the number of the subject, so to be honest I kinda dissapointed. Moreover, as the story goes I also feels kinda frustrated with MC behaviour. Again I come here expecting some kind of faction building, so I expect the protagonist have some quality of a leader, but I am disappointed. The proeels like a door mat, (at least as far as chapter 41) especially the scene where he gives many equipment but got nothing, even up until that point, she still doesnt trust him. To be honest, he is really not a good leader material, I'm confused how he even got that system. With honesty over the top that question whether he is jp protag, to some kind of naive personality by trusting other people too easily. But overall it's somewhat ejoyable story

"Stay. Right. There."He whispered, enunciating each word. His sister nodded warily and watched as Aaron disappeared out of sight. He stalked up to the front door, making his footsteps as quiet as possible. The peephole in the upper middle of the frame felt intimidating and unnerving at the same time, and as Aaron pressed his face against it he felt even more unnerved. However, his feelings of unease were short lived once he set eyes on the warped figure on the other side of the door.

System:999 duodecillion

"Why?"