It's just a bad piece of literature (if one can call it that). The grammar, the tenses, and the sentence structure is bad and needs revising. The objectification of women is bad and a dumb choice.The logic behind the system and the different things in the world is flawed and inconsistent. E.g guns made pre-WW2 era works but any post-WW2 gun does, somehow, not work. (+The systems guns work?) The principle behind them is pretty much the same for the two sides. The units of measurement is not well planned. In other words, I do not recommend you read this novel if you don't want to lose brain cells.
Okay okay I've only read to chapter 9 but I can tell this is better than both of the VR novels currently in the top 40. The grammar is impeccable. The MC isn't dull, I haven't gotten to the side characters yet but I have complete faith in the author. Please don't drip this novel Mr. Author I'll do the best I can to get this noticed. I'm in it for the long haul. 😁
I would like to make a protest for more chapters!! The development was so good I got impatient to look for more. Author, my friend, update soon please!
I love this novel. Keith's character is great. He is smart and knows how to use the knowledge he has. The depictions of harem characters are good. Each one feels amazing. There is a writing style that conveys the emotions that are formed. Only the broadcast speed is a little slow. I hope the author publishes it faster. I can't wait for the episodes.
New translator? The previous translator is mistycloud 🤔. Same translator with a novel genius doctor black belly miss. I’ve been waiting to continue to read this novel so long. I hope the translator will give mass release chapters, but 9 chapters????? I’ve read more hundreds chapters. Till when I can wait to continue to read the story?
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