petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Pretty good story, though the novel is not helped by the misleading title. The story is basically about a summoner who can't control his summons, so he is pretending to be a video game to get his summons to do what he want. It's pretty different from the usual gamers in another world stories.
I would so love to rate this story as a 5, however there are some key issues that ruin this story for me.The first major problem in this story is the writing quality. Now I'm not 100% sure, but I'm assuming the author English is a secondary language. The constant and blatant grammatical errors ruin 99% of the immersion of the story for me.The updating doesn't seem to be very stable.The story development seems to be fairly well done, it does need some work though.The character design seems to be fleshed out nicely. The author makes a strong effort to give his mc a strong background story that gives justice to things hes done/is doing.The world background also gets explained fairly well. Though there haven't been many chapters, so far this part seems done as well as can be.Honestly my biggest complaint comes from the writing quality. If the author could fix this, I believe he would have a solid story.
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