The Trickster’s Hat

Nice story It's really interesting ??

Tbh, I am puzzled why others are saying that the first part of the book is only good and it gone downhill after that. In fact I almost gave up during the first chapters because I found it to very cringe, a system who can copy other super powers, another ruthless wannabe mc and etc. But I gave it a chance and it turned out that it was actually a great read. Actually I find this book very interesting, it gives a glimpse of how things would looked like after a post apocalyptic world. Here in this book, the world is ruled by organisations called "consortiums" basically they are like a company who controls political and military power. It is centered around a so called "strongholds" there are approximately a total of 178 stronghold, each stronghold is like a city where it houses hundreds of thousands of people. And there we can see that this alliance of stronghold is the what's left of what's left on the once brilliant civilization of humanity but was ended after a nuclear war. Each consortiums have their own number of stronghold basically they can be describe as a country each having their own strongholds. Now, each strongholds have their own so called "refugee towns" and the treatment of refugees is vastly different from a citizen of a strongholdNow let's talk about the mc, the mc is actually well written for me, although I had my own misconceptions at first due to reading to much ruthless wanna be mc in other trash novels, from what I read there is actually a reason why he turned out that way, first of all he is a refugee and in the refugee camp in a post apocalyptic era human rightsnand morality is something that will be laughed at by others, it's a dog eat dog World. Most of them would scramble for food, even killing others to steal their foods and belongings and most likely anybody would become ruthless if they want to live. From what I read in other reviews , they said that on the later part of the story they said that the mc feels forced, stating that he gone too soft from a ruthless guy to someone who would save others even if its supposed to be inconvenient form him. from my experience of reading almost 1033 chapters, Ren Xiaochu experienced growth guys, in the past he used to be ruthless and uncaring for others except for his younger brother because the situation called for it, he is weak and grown into a place where it is kill or be killed, but as times goes on his powers also grew, he met a lot of people where he experienced friendship, and found people whose light haven't been corrupted by the sorrows of their era, such as Chen Wudi.

I’m assuming you read the version on Wattpad and you are just putting it on this platform.

Writing Quality (Translation) ★• Translation is a good or even worst than MTLStory Development ★★• MC transmigrated to a world called "Blue Planet" where a game called "Heaven" has fallen upon them, there's a ranking system  and of course the mc has no parents troupes..Character Design ★• The mc is very predictable, with no development, just him and his narcissistic self.. He even wanted his saber to call him "Big Brother" instead of "Master

Its alright, sometimes the plot can be a bit ridiculous and strange. What really puts me off is the grammar. The Author tries to say too many things in one sentence and it ends up being a confusing jumble of words. It honestly reads like a machine translation. I can’t read this, purely becuase of the horrendous grammar and writing.

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I just don't understand why certain chapters repeat i dont know if this is accidental or not but otherwise the story is great and i love it and i hope u contine to make it and improve this change as its very annoying

June 23, 2021BrotherHumble, Realm King.Eastern Divine Region,Snow Song Realm.Dear Procrastinator,I'm impressed by your diligence to finish your work. I know for a fact that it's hard for your novel vote counts to even reach 500, even so, you still continue to write a chapter of your novel tirelessly.. I respect you for that.Oh btw, you shouldn't compare yourself with other authors too much. It's distracting, can lead to poor quality work and low self-esteem. All you need to do is to keep improving and becoming better at writing novel than you were yesterday.Even if this novel turned out to be a failure, you can always keep on writing with a much better skills and experience than before as a result of your diligence. You can even write a new novel with your improved writing skills and experience.Sincerely,BrotherHumble