The Transmigrated Max-Level Paladin in a Cultivation World

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I'm not a fan so forgive me if I'm unnecessarily harsh also I'm not great at reviews and if you do decide to read i hope you enjoy.-------------------------------The Story starts with our protagonist dying because god was skipping rocks and killed him and the system is like "oh no, Anyway". He is then given a choice between traveling the world or opening a shop and he has to make it in 90 seconds.Regardless of what he chooses he has to go to Origin city or something to do his artist exam to start off as a D grade artist. The oh so quirky and lovable system lily the white cat doesn't give him supplies or the money to take the exam but she decides in the moment to give him a half god item or something.(shape-shifting brush) He says some fake things that turn out true and takes the exam and is mistaken for being from somewhere by fake thing turned true.Stuff happens and he's elevated to C grade but a girl 1 year younger then him is at least a B grade so he wants to work harder. this is a lot of rambling -------------------------------The characters don't connect to me and come off as annoying and unbearable.I read like 3-4 chapters in and it hasn't pulled me in at all and i know next to nothing.The main character also isn't interesting with him being the best artist or something at 16 years old in his old world and he also gets pushed around by the system and barely complains. Also please don't give me or others negatives comments just  ask them to put something similar to what i did at the beginning Thanks for reading this cluster feck

It's a good story so far.  The story development is interesting, as is the character design and world background.  The main character has a good head on his shoulders, and seems to have real life abilities that he can transfer into the game.  Good job.

..................excellent novel .............................i strongly recommend to read this novel simply superb. the way MC is portrayed is so awesome

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This story has an interesting prologue. Even with just the start, this is very hooking. The narration was legit and easy to read. With finishing touches, this will rise above the rest. All in all, a wonderful job creating an awesome novel!

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Very intrigued to see where this will go. The writer’s sense of detail when portraying the subject is keen. My only critique might be off of how forward some of the introduction is. Keep up the great work!