The Tough-Faced Owner of A Fluffy Cafe ~ The Strongest Mercenary Feared as the Headhunter, Living Leisurely Surrounded by Little Girls and Cute Monsters ~

You have an interesting take on storytelling but your needs to be edited further so your readers won't be distracted while reading. It's good of you to ask for feedback and I truly hope your work will get better because of those. :)

a good enough story, such a pity it wasn't chosena good enough story, such a pity it wasn't chosena good enough story, such a pity it wasn't chosen

Giving it a five stars because this story seems to be pretty unique compare to most light novels nowadays. The cover is interesting and the synopsis is good. If I had to give it an honest review just based off of all of this, then I would give it 4.25/5 but Qidian doesn't work like that so 5 stars it is then.

Where the FUCK is the Next chapter HUN AUTHOR SAN?!?!?DO YOU KNOW HOW BIG OF A CLIFF HANGER YOU LEFT OF ON? HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!! Maybe just a few more chapters?? hm? a closure? hm? maybe? please?

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the story is fresh breath of air among the same old ones, i liked concept and its execution. moreover mass release made my day therefore early review, thank you author.

hey sister nice work I appreciate it and congrats you to welcome a great novel  in the web novel Praise the work and I pray to the God that you would get succeed in it this work maintain the hard work

After many unsuccessful attempts on the part of the captain, his frustration and fatigue was increasing. What bothered the young man the most was the resistance that these chains had.