As Shi Jieyi had already vented out her lust once, under Lin Tianlong's fierce attacks, her sensitive zone was stimulated once again by his member, and within a few hundred thrusts, she had given out a scream, her body shuddering. Her slender legs stretched outwards suddenly, and her waist arched back. Her hair danced in the air, her eyes semi-closed. Faint breaths escaped her lips in short bursts as warm fluids gushed out from the passage of her valley.
This book has great potential with its interesting concept and captivating plotlines. It may be inspired by other famous works, like what the author has said, but it has its uniqueness. Keep writing and upload more chapters with lots of content, unlike the first few chapters.
Well!I am reviewing my own book.And I'm not gonna go on and on about how good or marvelous it is.I only have two words for any readers out there: READ IT.Thank you.^=^/
Matte’s growth is really cool, but I’d love to see more ‘quiet moments’ where he reflects on the past. We get a lot of action (which is amazing), but some personal flashbacks could make him even deeper.
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