THE THORNS OF LOVE

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

"Eh, a bit of both, okay."

The entire web novel was written in the form of objectives and assumptions. While the ideas were good, the base material for them were not worked upon correctly. Some improvements such as expansion for some story plots, less assumptions on human character and development of side characters is necessary to make the novel more interesting to read. Proofreading is required .Otherwise a good story to read and pass time👍

i see what you did the updated version is better there is alot of things to note but so far the story progress is good i would love some clarification about shino abilities tho

Wow, wow, wow! I have only read the first chapter, but I just couldn't wait to comment on how amazing this story is so far! Out of all the Webnovel stories I've read so far, this is the best one yet. The moment I dived into the story, I was already possessed with amazement by the creative use of words, and the jaw-dropping storyline. The characters are well-portrayed in the first chapter. The reader already gets an idea of what the main characters are like even before jumping into the next chapter.The dialogue between the characters flows naturally, and the pacing of the story is good too. I definitely look forward to seeing what happens next 🤩 keep up the good work, author!

Wow, I got hooked in the first chapter I love it. Hope I can see more of this work. And I can be able to read more💯💯💯🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🙏🙏🙏