I'mma be honest first 3 or so chapters were really good and I was excited for the rest. The writing quality could be a little better but I'm just being a little bit picky. However I feel like everything when he got to the highschool was just not that good though. For example "the big breasted beauty" ok fine if you were just talking about her breasts... whatever; Not every other time you are talking about her though! It just comes across as lazy. Also, don't make a girl get a crush on him from walking in the room it's kinda awkward. I get that you may like anime but the mc speaks interchangeably different languages and you didn't translate ecchi to pervert or something similar? Sorry I don't want to be too harsh. I'll still read it as well. But the writing makes the girls seem very 2 dimensional and just not very interesting. I don't want to try to tell you what to do but at least in my opinion the story would be much more compelling and interesting if you made the girls less like the 2d cutouts in bad harem anime.Finally this is not super important but Is the MC black? I mean I assumed so since he was one of the first humans. Not to be racist or anything but almost no one in Japan is black so usually it would usually be noted in a Japanese girls internal thoughts. Is that why everyone comments on how black his hair and eyes are?I don't usually post criticism but I liked the story at the start so I wanted to give my 2 cents.
Sound decent. A reborn revenge story, I hope the MC isn’t too OP so there can be more striggle and action instead of one sided massacre. Looking forward!
In a word; Excellent! The story is basically a detective story set in ancient times but with Qi and supernatural powers. The normal tropes of transmigrator with good luck and using modern thinking to get ahead are there but the MC has no system and starts as a low-level martial artist with no way to easily improve. He need to use his brain, and the novel is better for it. Excellent!
Amazing it’s the first story were it feels like it could actually happen . Every part of it is feels real the story has allot of potential and the author is using it in a creative way And the more you read the more you see it’s uniqueness i am sure that any experienced reader will be happily surprised. If there is any changes I will updated the review in the comments
Writing improves as the story progresses(grammar, vocab, etc.). A great start of the protagonist's adventure to revenge.Writer have a writing style of first person perspective, solely focusing on the main character and events happening around him including his thoughts and thinking processes.Overall, a great story.
Honestly, the story is wayy too inconsistent. The mc has high attractivness to the monsters and beast but some beasts keep attacking him despite that, He was even able to control an owned beast before so why are weaker beast even thinkig of atckinghim this story is wayy tooo inconsistent
Very cool slice of life story and interesting writing style. The characters are all realistic with each of them having a significance of their own. The character interactions are great and the main characters are very likable.
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