The Prologue was a lil' bit of an info dump, but it's alright, probably.Grammar can improve, I already saw the author's comment on it- I won't fault :pensive: Otherwise, the story is so far- heating up, great setting, ez collection
Don't read this book. The book very illogical, it's like reading the delusions in a child's mind. With the general characteristics of bad books, the main character acts self important, as if the whole world put aside time to oppose him, the usual greed, childishness, hypocrisy, selfishnes, ... . . The only redeeming thing about his book is the "world background
The Adult Content tag should be removed since the explicit scenes have been removed.Just basic killing and innuendos don't quite qualify as Adult Content or Disney couldn't peddle their stuff to kiddos
First of all, I am not a pro at making reviews 2nd It's my opinion and what I think about it. 3rd I don't care if anyone will be offended by this.and 4th I read up to chapter 9The story has good potential but grammar has problems, the systems (power level, the name color) is not good (maybe gets better later), plot armor is thick, I think the MC is dumb and contradicts himself.Over all good but the mc to cliche for me and the grammar and systems need polishing.
Amazing book, please get it officialy instead of trial. The beginning is good, and the main character seems calm and cool. There is some mystery element in the novel. Characters are also described pretty well.
Interesting novel... Just curious if each world will have different realms and different cultivations as we already saw Magical & Physical cultivation... I feel it will be a lot and conjested... Just hope author adds 2-3 other methods & some can be repetion but with him going to a new world already a bit stronger... That would show progress instead of re-training for 30 worlds...
Amazing novel ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️. You can give it a try, I'm sure it will satisfy any virtual world lover. The starting is rather sad but romantic
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