A good storyline, the characters are fascinating to an extent that grabs the readers attention. A beautiful picture is created through these words. Overall a nice novel.
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First of all do the author want to continue updating this novel or not. What I want was a constant updates of at least 5 - 7 chapters/week, cause lately there aren't any update on this novel. This kind of situation really piss me off.
Reviewing at around chapter 275:I have conflicted feeling about this.the beginning was not too good in my opinion because the author went the extra mile with the drawbacks on the mc, imposing 4~5 handicaps.Then it turned out to be great with many things addressed and an excellent pace until around the mid hundred chapters, I was surprised by how good this turned out to be and was enjoying the story A LOT. afterwards I feel like it went downhill after the tournament arc. it's moving at a snail pace where there was no progress with the mc character for a hundred chapters (think about it, mc moved from lvl 0 to lvl 42 in less than 200 chapters then suddenly you have to grind a hundred chapters, one third of the story, where the mc lvl stagnates. To me that's killing the story with bad pace and not enjoyable one bit).Now to be fair, the story is about "kingdom building" since the title is about the base he is growing, so I would not complain that a lot of story time is spent on growing his forces, but the contrast in the pacing was too obvious. spending hundreds of chapters in events that take few months of story time is a mistake to me, especially when those events are not Central to plot AND the story is in early stages.I will probably come back to this afterwards but I am dreading the grind if the plot slows down as much as it did between lvl 42 to lvl 43.
This review is based on my first impression about the novel, evaluating bookcover, synopsis, tags and first chapter.For this reason, I'll edit it in the future.First things first, no problem with the bookcover, definitely eyecatching.The writing quality is really high and the errors of grammars, typos, etc. can be counted on one hand , for this reason I would add an extract to the synopsis to make it more engaging.I didn't give five on the writing because in the past I read a more immersing, dictionary-rich, without typos story.The update frequency Is really high(I'm genuinely curious how many daily writing hours does the author have in his routine).The pace of the speed Is fast but at a appreciable point and the final of chapter incourages binge reading. 😅In the first chapter 7 characters spoke (3 from m.c. family, stalker, m.c. girlfriend and gorilla couple) so there wasn't the physical space to make an interesting profile of a character but, I decided for 5 stars for the variety of personalities and the short and efficient descriptions.From the first chapter, reading the tags, this could be exchanged for any other isekai story but I decided to leave 4 stars because the descriptions of the locations are very detailed and add value to the litteral world in the background of m.c.'s story.Finally, in the complex the read is strongly recommended.
"Ok they use electromagnetic waves as a form of communication. Lighning is simply electricity and thus disrupts the signals. Certain stones block the signal i can make you a staff to communicate better because attuning your body is extremely painful and i cant do it without incredibly advanced technology. Does he perhaps have a way to imprint his hmm language onto the staff" she once again communicates with him
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