Phasing through him, Ultron fell behind Naruto, quickly firing off a beam of energy from the Mind Stone. Naruto, his body enhanced by Six Paths Sage Chakra, raised his hand out in front of him and caught the beam head on. The force of the attack drove him back, but he was able to keep it from overpowering him, fighting it off until Ultron eventually let up.
The beginning of this book is truly a banger. You are thrust immediately into the action, and the world building and character development happen naturally, without feeling forced. I am looking forward to future updates of this story : )
The premise of the story is interesting. A young prince of a particularly unfair kingdom is found to not have any magical abilities and is exiled. When all seems lost, he is transformed into an angelic species, a nephilim, and gets to prepare his revenge into the rival country.The story is however not particularly well written, and it’s not just because of the recurrent typos (which seem to often be caused by an autocorrector). It is frequent for the author to make long redundant descriptions when the point was already well conveyed in one paragraph. The character is often justifying his actions over and over when his motives were already sufficiently obvious given what we knew of him. Sometimes the author repeats what he just said, as if he never reread himself or has unfinished sentences. In short, the story suffers from a lack of editing, proofreading.
I guess am really shameless dropping a review for my book the second time. Somebody got to do it ........you know what they say be your own number one supporter....as much as I want to believe you like my book I font cause you guys don't comment
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