I also considered dropping this novel by 200+ chapter due to dull, repetitive dungeoning and MCs OPness, but I persisted, and it pays me off. Before, I can’t count how many times I spouted a chapter as unnecessary, but turns out to be necessary. This novel got me attached to the side characters, more so to our beloved Happy. What’s interesting to this novel too is that no one can be considered villains; everyone had their own reasons why they struggle and fight, which are relatable and sometimes pitiful. The world building is excellent, story narration is flawless, and translation quality is top notch. This is the best web novel I’ve ever read.
The Good thing about this novel is how well done the translation is. Beides a few minor troubles with the right vocabulary, but that might be because the original uses very hard to translate concepts, there is noting to complain.This is sadly not the case for the rest. Besides the stupid and illogical way the whole power/special ability system is presented, the whole story feels fractured. The flow is broken every few chapters to introduce new characters or motivations to destroy any kind of character impressions you had of the MC.It is literally a transformation from normal 9 to 5 worker, cowardly and meek, to a cutthroat assasin/businessman who enjoys killing, to a zealous cultivator, to a completely brain dead and high on power fool, to a lovestruck ape, to a responsible family guy, adopting useless baggage and carrying her trough supposedly life and death trials, and of course the always important nationalist. After reading more than 40 chapters I have seen many cliches, very few new ideas and there is still not a single positive or negative thing I can say about the MC.Worldbuilding/Background is one of the worst I have ever seen. There are literally thousands of other planets and possible alien races, but despite participating in a solar system wide event there is not a single description of an alien race. In general the reader has to imagine 90% because the author does not describe the places or people. The power system is even more flawed, just an example: Every being across multiple galaxies has the same brain structure and path of advancement, which means they are all human and have grown in the same environment, which explains a lot about this book, Not! According to the author there are different races, and planets which have developed 100s of times longer and use technology thousands of years in the future. Evolution or just the advancements brought by interstellar technology are just not a thing in this novel. Feels like if the British who used their technology to conquer dozens of nations and looked down on the aborigines are suddenly totally overrun and outgunned by a single village idiot who happens to gain the friendship and support of a deserter. At the same time there are many superfluous scenes, which increase word count and boredom in equal measures.To conclude, this novel is incomplete and needs to be reworked extensively before it can be called literature.The concept has potential, but the execution is rushed and majorly flawed.My Summary:An average guy gets lucky and optains the potential and resources to become powerful. Watch how he stumbles his way from an backwards nation into the middle of an intergalactic conflict. Follow him on his path of adventure, learning and personal growth.
Best ever CEO genre novel I have ever read in my life. Less fictional,sensible, so original I can basically feel the character and the possibilities in there..
This is a great story, it ought to be a hit. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）.
Hey author-san I just wanted to tell you how great your book is and how much I enjoy it. I would have given a 5 star review but with how many chapters there is I dont think its five star status but if it keeps developing down this road I do believe it can get 5 star status. I really love the system it reminds me of “Sovereign of the karmatic system” but I ended up dropping that book because it got very repetitive towards the end I hope that this novel doesnt go down that path. Also I hope that this book isnt like Martial god asura where the mc beats someones long lost son and now the mc has to beat a whole family tree. But besides that great book 👍 I really enjoy it and I hope you keep it up.
No podía para de leer, buenísimo!!! Me encantó lo actual del tema, con esta pandemia todos hemos sufrido pérdidas de nuestros amados y no es fácil, esta lectura me hizo imaginar que volveré a verlos Gracias!!
This novel is quite good but still need improvement.There is the writing skill and other matters that need improvement for the sake of the story. Beside, there's still a long journey for the success of the novel.
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