Interesting premice and worldbuilding but rather cliche charaxter and plot progression the author seems to sometime forget the levels of cultivation of the character from qi to core or core to nascent all around an enjoyable story when you want to pass time might rewiew again in the future
I like the story so far, but I seriously hope to god it doesn’t become another Necromancer story. Sadly it feels overdone, and i hope it goes in a different direction. Still would read nonetheless, but it would be a lot less interesting.
Giant cliche, cant really become more cliche. Example: he goes to the market and finds a really amazing martial arts book and the guy selling has no idea how valuable it is, so the mc gets it for the cheap and the martial art stance isnt even creative, the first thing the mc does to practice it is just a horse stance
I love this story all you need is to improve grammar, update speed, and story development along with other things. Tbh, I'm not that good at writing either and I'm not saying your not good. You are actually the first person's novel I really enjoy. Keep up the good work and train harder....
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the author of COBI (Castle of the Black Iron) and Silver Overlord has a strong patriotism when it comes to his country (based on the 2 previous novel that i read of his) so expect the Hua (china) is a great country / the most powerful nation / powerful soldier and advance technology thingy. His novel is catered more on Chinese rather than international readers but if you liked COBI and Silver Overlord this will be probably also appeal to you
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