i like the beginning...i like where this is going with the vampires and everything...but i only have 1 request author...pls dont nerf rudra in this book...just to make max look good....he was an op main character and i hope he will still remain the same later in this book...max obviously will be op too...there is nothing wrong with having 2 op characters by the end of this series
Good plot but story can be dull during world building phase but overall solid and different just want more updates.P.S Recommend stockpiling chapters due to slow release rate
I normally don't drop novels this fast, but I got too pissed off. I don't know about everyone else, but personally I started this novel partially because I saw that the MC was raised as a killer after being kidnapped by a dark organisation. I normally gravitate to these stories because it means the MC is ruthless and broken which makes for interesting reading (not raised to be assassin, but Supreme Magus is a great example of broken character). But then there is a timeskip and they are now teenagers. These two prodigies, who have grown up competing and sharpening each other every day get bullied by their slightly older sister who we have never had any indication is strong. Very annoying, but I accepted it and chalked it up to a staple of the genre, despite how infuriating it is. But then he gets attacked by a girl, randomly and with no provocation. So what happens. Does this MC who was raised as a weapon until the age of 9 fight back? Does the MC, who had to survive by fighting both male and female kids his own age to survive retaliate? No, he fucking doesn't. He takes it. Then she attacks him again. Is he finally provoked, and pushed to reveal a little of his killer instinct? Hell no. He doesn't like hitting women. Then when she attacks him again and pushes him to fight, and he wins, does he show any kind of ruthlessness? No he politely says goodbye, and says she can find him any time. This, in simple terms is a complete betrayal of who he is as a character, and it's a complete betrayal of the readers who have invested in the character. So dropped.
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Wow! This story is really intriguing 💞💞 I still wanna know more about this story. Great start by the way, the story development is quiet good too. While you handle very well the translation. Keep up the good work, and always do your best. Good luck to us. 😉😉
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