The Strongest Qi Refining Period

I really like the story but from Chapter 18 it totally got fumbled up. I mean the timeskip is okish but it too much it remove the essence of the starting which I basically like the most. Their struggle how he overcome it with his pure intelligence. Overall the story before that is too good but from that chapter it goes downhill.I got totally confused what happening and when happening ,where happening. Each chapter like new time new place suddenly.

Now, seeing MC himself contemplating Self,I etc.  seeing it requires comprehension to gain skills not just shouting their name is first towards a real cultivation game, I hope MC doesn't always act like fool, and please improve the IQ,EQ levels of side,bg characters.Mainly cowardice is the result of caution and sometimes in a place like xianxia worlds even then it is required to take risks considering probability(I think in this case Mc should be able to guess it because of his mind) and maintaining caution.Hopefully MC remains intelligent in all cases and all the best to author

Amazing read so far. The author did a great work with the world and character building. Interesting and attention gripping from start. The author sure know how to hook the audience. Kudos, loving forward for more

Autor, por favor... atualizar os capítulos até 400 pelo menos pq a outra versão já passou de 400, sei que vc gosta mais da outra versão mas essa aqui não é ruim kkkk por favooor

I dont know if i every reviewed this before. but i have been here since u re-released chapter 40 in other book. I can say for sure its a great fanfic about an mc with mixed blood from senju and uchiha and best part is they used kotoatsumi on hiruzen then killed danzo. loved the focus on medical jutsu and fuinjutsu. give it a try.

Judging by the hole in the satellite picture

Morita, Hirano and Imamura, who had already regained consciousness with a couple of blows fatality on the part of the blonde, looked at each other as if giving reason to what they heard.

Others said they were angels, sent by the Gods, to save humans.