The Stoner & The Blind Girl

Silvana looked around as she spoke, " I do feel the energy, and your words ring true to my ears.  No one lies to the huntress. "

Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming

The writing is good, plot is kind of unique but character development is needed. The main story goes around Iori but still now she is playing the role of weak, inocent woman...

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.Your turn. And I look forward to your thoughts on my Going In Completely Blind fanfic.