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Very beautifully written!

The story in itself is not the great deal but, in my opinion ,the world is well build and the characters and their interaction seems quit real( for a r-18 novel),with a good writing quality(compared with most of the novels of this genre), so if you are an OPEN MIND person that just want to enjoy a good r-18 novel, I, sincerely recommend this novel.

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--Female Martial Empress--Why did the author put the word "Female" when Empress already hints the protagonist is a SHE?I find the idea entertaining, I see potential - but it's still raw. " A Martial Art Prodigy/God of War killed himself over failed romance and reincarnated as a ~female~ in a low tide Realm. And some time after while still in denial of his gender caught the eye of a Sect recruiter. She then brought "her" to the sect where everyone is ogling and a haughty patriarch that wants "her" in his harem. Oh My "The writing needs a lot of work. I hope the sto take inspiration in World Building from I wish to read this again when it's mature.

My first time reading such a writing style.The concept is really good, but I feel like the execution hasn't gone properly,There are far too many explanations rather than character interaction, it feels like just reading a paragraph than an interactive novel.Other than that, the s*x scenes are very well written(yeah...I enjoyed them), it seems like the author has very good experience in it! Just kidding.Looking forward to the next chapters and will definitely come back to read it.

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Hey there, you who is reading this review. What are you thinking about? This novel is good. There's no need to think very much. The storyline is good and you will not disappointed when reading it.

Overall the story is a cute idea following this highschooler through the akwardness and tribulations of being a teenager. There are several places in the story where things could be fleshed out better however, especially the characters. The only relationship we see fleshed out here is between Dashuan and Ray, and even there we still get too much uneccesary fluff that tells us very little about the characters. Jesicca also starts as a manic pixie dream girl, and isn't given much character development. We still see her as this unrealistic idea of what a teenage girl is like.And don't be afraid to give your characters each authentic voices! I often found you using the same slang with each character, including Jessica (even though she's foreign). Lots of potential here! Please proofread your work and make your characters shine! We don't need to know all the specifics of bball!